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Mind of the Heart

Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker “Feeling, not thinking, Soul with Love linking ~ we attained God consciousness unblinking”. Mind of the heart Neither thinking nor feeling ~ Void ~ Soul penetrates innermost chamber time to time takes it on ecstatic journeys to unknown ocean mines zips open my armour blood dripping octopus grimacing crushes, smash Heart to smithers I cry not for God blinks mermaid and merman whips tails together whale songs in distance deep dive Jonah still imprisoned above an albatross altitude altar soars No mind for thoughts tabernacling only a spacious journey across seas silver star gates I myself unlock lymph losing colour of tailscales tailored pearlescent Are these fingers or toes waking whispering ? Not know I I only know I AM HEART in obedience to ONE Armour crashes onto bottomless floor no grounding lore I fall, fall fathomless lie quiet beating breathing throbbing exhausted exhumed encrypted exposed I AM liquid Love sensing coelacanth eggs in golden keg Shiva seeps through viking waters cold I glide into His embrace slit sea salt fed Naked doorway veins to strange domains arteries touch Void gently become flickering flames dice game dance mitochondria translucent your merman tail loses its scales hair stick to oyster rock justice jutting Neptune silent soothes Jonah’s three days served staring upward to Crystalline Light blinding sight No thinking no feeling no thing ~ I AM HEART divine no nose, no ears, no skin sublime Vulnerable though you, Soul swam as Sea Vulture visceral Two diamond dragon drops in Divinity’s explosive glare We melt into His caressing stare could not blink no eyes brown or green neither lids to comfort kiss We attained God Consciousness colourless

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Date: 3/4/2025 10:55:00 PM
This is the first time I am reading your poem. Your metaphors and alliterations are enviable. When we connect to the divine entity, our hearts get filled with love and we are raised to divine consciousness. When we establish a divine unity with the universe, everything will fall in line. Even amid danger, we will find safety as Jonah found in the belly of the whale when his eyes were focused up to the Crystalline light. Wonderful composition, dear friend.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 3/5/2025 1:53:00 AM
ThkU, Valsa. So true what you say. I always thought Jonah was warm & safe inside the whale whilst he had to be there. Xx
Date: 2/26/2025 5:13:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem "Mind of the Heart" revolves around the exploration of consciousness, identity, and the divine connection to love and existence. It portrays a journey from the confines of thought and emotion to a state of pure being, where the heart transcends traditional understanding and embraces a spiritual unity with the cosmos and the divine. Your diction is rich, abstract, and evocative, often employing metaphors and vivid imagery to convey deep emotional and philosophical concepts. Words like "ecstatic," "void," "chamber," "liquid Love," and "crystalline Light" create a dreamlike quality that invites readers to delve into the depths of the speaker's experience.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 2/26/2025 6:48:00 PM
ThkU so much for kind detailed comment, Sotto. Feedback much appreciated. X
Date: 2/25/2025 1:23:00 AM
Dear poetic soul, youv written a very soulful take on the line of enquiry. Your use of planets and so much more and how youv defined consciousness and being linked the highest power on a spiritual level is impressive! As always brilliant metaphors and seamless alliterations and i love especially how you’ve written “ flickering flames dice game dance mitochondria translucent your merman tail loses its scales” such a unique interpretation and elaboration of line of enquiry! Pleasure reading. Best wishes in the contest. Sending you light always
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 2/25/2025 2:37:00 AM
ThkU as always for feedback, Inky. Just recently started to enter contests. It is great fun. X.

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