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Feb.25.2025
Mind of the Heart Poetry Contest
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Line of inquiry: “feeling not thinking, soul with love linking ~ we attained God consciousness unblinking” The heart that pulsates within, we can touch and feel Mind, unlike heart is an entity invisible, but can feel and heal. It is a secret domain where resides qualities like love and hope, Not tangible, can’t be seen even through a Laparoscope. A thinking heart may endlessly reason and debate But a feeling mind is one where love and empathy conjugate An ideal man is not one whose heart is made of flint like stone But a man with an intuitive mind, repentant and is ready to atone He can sense the suffering of others, their joys and strife. Through his empathy and compassion, he enriches life. He may openly show his vulnerability to cry and mourn. But know, it is within a feeling heart that love breeds and is born. He holds on tenaciously to the faintest glimmer of hope Finding ways to stay firm and in every situation, ready to cope. He is able to handle things before his heart starts violently beating, With hopes of fresh tomorrows and new innings, awaiting. Life, being a never- ending tortuous and hazardous journey, Through curves and bumps, God guides. He alone is our attorney. When our soul is linked with love, we scale the heights to God’s presence, With heart and mind integration and beatitude, feeling His essence. To God’s Consciousness, when our mind thus rises weightless and pure, In that moment, we feel truly blest, and from all vexations find cure.

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Date: 3/5/2025 2:03:00 AM
Lovely rhythm to compare mind & heart. Yes. We need them both. I enjoyed the line : with Heart and Mind integration and beatitude feeling His essence// so lovely how presence & essence goes together because it is the same thing ! I never thought of that. ThkU x.
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Date: 2/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Dear Valsa, What an incredible poem about the interplay of the heart and head, illustrating the necessity of mental agility, empathy, and love in human life. The poem implies that, while the heart is a palpable organ that can be felt, the mind, albeit invisible, plays an important part in mending and nourishing these emotional traits. It also touches on kindness, fragility, hope, and an inner link with higher awareness, implying that true happiness comes from combining heart and mind in the quest for an adequate life. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/26/2025 10:15:00 PM
Powerful and poignant sprinkled with it’s your stylish wisdom! You should do well in the contest! Best wishes!
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Date: 2/25/2025 9:34:00 AM
Excellent poem depicting the superiority of heart over mind. What we need now is hope to be loved and adored.
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:04:00 PM
Thank you Jay ji. But please know that it is the superiority of mind over heart that I have been trying to extol in this.
Date: 2/25/2025 8:33:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your poetic magic touched something deep inside of me. I love how you speak the truth. I’ve felt it at times but couldn’t fully express the intertwining of heart and mind, the strength in vulnerability, and the power of God’s love to heal. Excellent!! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel.
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Date: 2/25/2025 6:59:00 AM
Nice poetic look at the superiority of heart over mind, empathy and kindness over raw intellect. Surely Jesus was the most intelligent man who ever walked the earth. But he was known for his love and kindness toward others rather than his explanations of the inner workings of the cosmos. Well done Valsa
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Date: 2/25/2025 1:58:00 AM
- Is there anything we need, and maybe especially now, it's hope, Valsa :) - A beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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