Tammy Reams Poet Dramatic Monologue

Mind of a Serial Killer Ii

I see her as she starts to approach toward me
carrying roses for her special day
her mind in an hypnosis state not aware this is the closest I've been to her
as I start to forbear from her

I have watched her for days and days have become weeks
she is not meek but 'oh' so, so sweet
my heart beats a thousand beats in the anticipation to come
with my new techniques just for her that will occur

The echoes in my mind talk to me as I get to close to her
and warns me not to impose or I may become exposed
I will silently watch her for now and I give her my vow
you are mine my sweet divine!

Do you feel me? Do you want me?

    T Reams

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Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 4:56 PM fascinating Tammy love this series hugs 7 Tammy Reams July 24, 2015 at 5:20 PM Thanks again!

Laura Breidenthal April 28, 2015 at 12:47 AM Oooooh, his fixation on her is quite intriguing. A very interesting character you've developed. Always, Laura Tammy Reams July 24, 2015 at 5:22 PM Thank you Laura for the nice comment. Sorry this is late I have been away for awhile.

Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2015 at 9:11 AM On to part three! Tammy Reams April 2, 2015 at 10:56 AM Thanks! Keep going.

Nicole Ussery March 25, 2015 at 8:39 AM That was very interesting, when I write short stories it is kind of like that. But in a good way you are talented. Check out some of my poems too, you might enjoy them. Tammy Reams March 25, 2015 at 1:46 PM Thank you for your comment Nicole. I will check out some of your writes. Make sure to read part 3 of this. It's getting deeper.

Allison Carver February 24, 2015 at 5:28 PM Very, very, interesting. Tammy Reams February 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM Thank you for your interest. This is part two. You can read the first one I did with the same title. I think I'm going to make this a continued poem. Thank you again for your comment.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 18, 2015 at 10:03 AM Gah this is dramatic and dark in a spine tingling way!!! Sadistic perhaps? Just poetry. Pls do review my latest poem too. Tammy Reams February 18, 2015 at 4:08 PM Thank you Kamoonpuri for your comment. This is part 2 of a possible continued poem. I will check out you poems next. Part 3 of a Serial Killer will be a little more intense.