Mind Mine

The child in me stands out, often, rudely, 
Shocking me; shaking me; threatening me;
Questioning all foundations and traditions,
Rites, rituals, routines, convictions...

Sometimes like logical philosopher,
Sometimes like ancient saintly foreteller;
Sometimes like wild rough, rude beastly creature,
Provokes thoughts on life with its true feature...

It's in such character transformation, 
Assumed the form of child in transition;
Finding enchantments all over the earth,
Felt fascination for her very birth...

This little girl, my inner child, asks me,
To tell stories on butterflies, fancy;
Might be owing my mood, then, anger-filled,
There's once one, I said, it's dead and got burred...

This made commotion on the child within,
Butterflies have appositely term thin;
Why don't we, at least, in our stories give,
Greater life-span and make them to long live...


26 January 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/25/2022 10:02:00 PM
I really like this pen of your inner child. I too have written at least one pen to my inner child. It is a difficult thing to do, having a conversation with your inner child. Sometimes, they don't like us much. Write on~ )O( DragonBlue
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Date: 1/25/2022 10:28:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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