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Mind Burp

The hero of my story is a loser Going back in time one day of my life every day of my life just to kill myself Making myself devolve just to join the same I am no better than anyone else and never want to be Justice missing its ice You may visit but i am the one that lives in here No end credits to watch Please put rubbish in the bin provided

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/21/2019 5:21:00 AM
get rid of the ice and light your fire...you're onto something here Quigley - "losers" can evolve to become some of the fiercest heroes in history. This poem needs to be put on a flag somewhere, forget the rubbish bin.
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 5/21/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for your words of kind
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 5/21/2019 5:22:00 AM
keep writing, keep spewing it forth...there are some fabulously priceless gems here among your portfolio...the story is intriguing.

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