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Mind Burp

The hero of my story is a loser
Going back in time one day 
of my life every day of my life
just to kill myself
Making myself devolve
just to join the same
I am no better than anyone else
and never want to be
Justice missing its ice
You may visit
but i am the one that lives in here
No end credits to watch
Please put rubbish in the bin provided

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 5/21/2019 5:21:00 AM

get rid of the ice and light your fire...you're onto something here Quigley - "losers" can evolve to become some of the fiercest heroes in history. This poem needs to be put on a flag somewhere, forget the rubbish bin.

Christopher Quigley
Date: 5/21/2019 12:33:00 PM

Thank you for your words of kind

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 5/21/2019 5:22:00 AM

keep writing, keep spewing it forth...there are some fabulously priceless gems here among your portfolio...the story is intriguing.