Mind Blowing

This is a wonderful prayer styled poem. I like the essence of the poem and the theme. Peace ought to be the aim of all hearts. I like the flow of the words and the message. Keep praying, and great job! ~Joseph

So do I. my every wish is for peace, this power struggle is so tiring, is it not? Peace Fathima

True that. Lena

Too true. Nice write

Deneen, yes, ther eis nothing like it. A snmooth and lovely read. Michael

Shalom is a great blessing in life D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

correct. nothing like it. john

peace of mind is what we all wish for. this was a wonderful message, well written. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments.

Peace of mind is wonderful if you can achieve it. I am always searching for peace of mind but it always eludes me. You seem to understand what its like to have peace of mind because your work shows it. Thanks for sharing your work.

hehehe! SImple but true.. nice write deneen, witty and honest indeed! Brgds. George

true, very true! nice!

so Nicely written thank you for these comforting words my loving sister in Christ. God bless you for all the nice and wonderful things you do for others. Thakyou for your warm comments and sincere thoughts. Wish you were my neighbor. Excellent write Michael

I love how there is a certain sense of irony in structure yet the message conveyed is there and truly inspiring. Truly a mind blowing piece Deneen. Love, B.