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Mind Battles

Hayfever Hayfever, say you don't exist, i have just now been cured, if you will always insist, it's half the battle lured, so i insist i have a cold, no hay fever lingers here, have no itchy nose insist, deleted file i'm cured!!! mind battles hey:) convincing the subconciousness is the real game here... inspired by Carol... Don Johnson 27-sep-11

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Date: 10/12/2011 9:30:00 PM
You know I think I love this. :)
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Date: 9/26/2011 7:34:00 PM
oh yeah? i always thought the game was letting the subconscious convince me... but whudda ino... many wavelengths of sunshine to ya, Don Johnson!~N
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Nancy Jones
Date: 9/26/2011 7:45:00 PM
lol... if it works, it works... preesh ya muchly
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/26/2011 7:42:00 PM
Hey Nancy, I con my subconciousness into believing i have no hay fever and for the last 12 months i have no symptoms.... so my sub. believes me ...perhaps... Of course i sneeze with a cold sometimes, but its not hay fever, i insist:) feel good about my lie to the subconcious too! bullkrapp baffles branes tooo
Date: 9/26/2011 7:08:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..I hope that you wind that battle..It is not any fun having hayfever..Sara
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