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Mind and I

Mind and I Twins in one body Does the mind live in me? or Do I live in the mind? complicated to segregate this The mind is the chief commander of life, commands me to follow the rules by this I am subjected, oppressed and defeated... -13.12.2020 Chattogram

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Date: 12/22/2020 8:35:00 AM
A great subject matter for a poem. I would have enjoyed seeing you flesh this concept in more detail. For, indeed, the question of the mind and I is interwoven with the trilogy of self: Heart, Mind, Spirit, and their conflicts within us.
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Date: 12/13/2020 8:47:00 PM
Interesting muse, Mahtab... Hard to know who rules whom! As well, are we 'alive' outside of out of our minds?! -- All great food for thought. Kudos, Gershon
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