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Under the sky of the twinkling night, My mind flew like the untidy kite, That knocked the door of her gloomy thoughts, And made me for a second totally clot. Suddenly I realized my eyes were wet, Feeling the colourful bonanza of that mate, Who never gave me a chance, To consider her my heartiest companion for once. I don’t know what will be the climax of this love story, As everyone thinks I have about her no worry, But what my heart wants no one knows, In my every smile my whole grip blows, Creating the blockage of my happiness, And snatching from me all my confidence. Please give me the suggestion what to do, Please tell me if you get any clue, To over bream my heart with the love of her, And help me to get victory in his love war……

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Date: 2/20/2016 10:12:00 PM
Dipankar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:59:00 PM
Dipankar, :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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