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I I write- words quavering with emotion- my words speak thickly fragments of my life minced words that ramble and I lispandslur I croak and hesitate and mitigate words oh this world is so shattering-beautiful my pen fragments of minced words that ramble and jumbledthoughts come tumbling I have a message-to embody in words it's a phrase a thought and an utterance whispering a mamby-pamby poem minced words that ramble breathe rupture II tumbling words from a word picking girl of promise mincedwords goody-good-good words that splinter the soul with pain and sorrow minced words in verse and rhyme _______________________________ June 17, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/"minced' words that ramble Copyright Protected, ID 16-802-129-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Minced Words sponsor, John Lawless Third Place

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Date: 6/29/2016 2:08:00 AM
I really enjoyed your verse, and the structure style of your verses... Congrats BW, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/27/2016 1:25:00 PM
This style is uncommon and very effective,congrats Broken!
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:58:00 AM
Fantastic, Constance! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:35:00 AM
Well done Constance!!!(eat your heart out E.E.). The line breaks and spacing, the elision of the words for effect, all worked brilliantly. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 6/22/2016 10:00:00 PM
You couldn't have done better, Constance! Goid Luck!
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:13:00 AM
Love the layout. Well done BW.
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:58:00 AM
This is something different:) Well written, Constance:)
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Date: 6/17/2016 4:40:00 PM
You sure didn't mince your words with this creative write Constance - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 6/17/2016 4:16:00 PM
Finally I'm hitting the jackpot with amazing poetry. Broken, I'm pleased to read your newest poem. A high 7. Luv skat
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