Minarets of Memories

"whistling a chorus of heartbeats which once whirled in your scent." -- Absolutely love that! With every failed relationship, a new chance to try again. The heart is never empty, having infinite passion and space.

Vivid imagery with phrases like "beneath the sea-mist moon" and "minarets of chartreuse stars."

Hi Hiya….lovely to see you back with your beautiful words…lovely gentle write! Debx

beautiful and emotional, i loved everything in your poem, the form is brilliant, thanks poet

I like this in the way the words sing. It lists like a song.

Very descriptive hour-glass shaped poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

This is so beautiful, Hiya. The imagery is magic! A fave! :)

Gorgeous - you seem to "breathe" your poetry, and it's beautiful like you :)

Gorgeous writing here, wow!

Ah dear sweet hiya, this is beyond ethereal and magical how youv expressed here in such an evocative and soul stirring manner! I absolutely love the metaphors alliterations and also the depth of emotions youv conveyed here, how beautiful! And your use of mythology and clever diction truly is never mainstream but so artistic! I really felt the lines "Hear me as I fade in sighs, twinkling within silver strands of sand ~ " yes thats so touching! I hear you! And the ending , with " a mere memory breathing you. Says it all how you are engrossed in memories and how somethings are timeless and feelings that remain deep within, i just love everything about this and this definitely is one of your best etherees! A fave for me! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always!!!!