Million Tears

To feel the pain of a million tears pour from somewhere deep inside is that just 
good for the soul?

  To see the love in their eyes as they walk with someone else,
 does that make life a pity game?

   Never to have felt love is that the way to grow,
 no tears wasted no tingle up the back when the phone rings.
 Summer days replaced by the thunder of words that ends a dream?

   Let them fall or hold in tight feel them on the horizon for to let go is to go insane. 
Happy sounds or angry words a joy to feel as they call your name as you sleep at night,
 You call a name hold a hand it’s just in your mind and they silently fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/1/2009 5:27:00 AM
Interesting Pat,KEEP SMILING;and keep writing too.The Best...PRINCE
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patrick. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:53:00 PM
I like this very much. I think it might flow a litter better with some puctuation. Its a very, very nice piece. BG
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Date: 11/14/2009 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Patrick! Thanks for sharing your work! Welcome to PS and please keep on writing. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/14/2009 9:44:00 AM
yet another great poem brought forth from someone's mind. thank you for posting this poem! ------Ell
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