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The milk coffee skies of Paris in May, make the Seine river look insanely gray. At sunrise it’s quiet - the traffic’s mostly bikes our digs are luxurious and private my school stress is waning - it’s nice I want to get up sigh I don’t want to get up, We’ll vote on it later - I think it’s a tossup. What will today bring? More thunderstorms and kisses? *grin* I hope so. I pull the covers up. Peter stretches and asks, “what are you doing?” I chuckle, and say, “Come and find me,” when he does, Paris is fun in May . . songs for this: How Deep is your love - Live at the MGM Grand by Bee Gees Houdini by Dua Lipa Disco Boots by Gavin Turik Not My Fault by Reneé Rapp & Megan Thee Stallion

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Date: 5/23/2024 8:12:00 AM
Dear Anais, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of a tranquil Parisian morning, where the milk-coffee skies and serene Seine river set the stage for quiet introspection and simple pleasures. I loved how your words evoke a sense of calm amidst the bustling city, where school stress fades and moments of joy abound. Ahh, to cherish the small moments and embrace the unpredictable beauty of each day. What a lovely reflection. - Blessings, Daniel
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Anais Vionet
Date: 5/23/2024 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I'm trying to grab the moments - they seem slow in the happening and fast in memory. I hope you're having a great summer! =]
Date: 5/22/2024 10:14:00 PM
Have a smashing good time. Is Charles in the next room?
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Chris Con
Date: 5/24/2024 8:20:00 PM
Interesting, 2 particle colliders so close together ... Must be quite hot and noisy in an electric kind of way. =]
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Anais Vionet
Date: 5/23/2024 5:37:00 AM
Mr & Mrs Charles are across the hall ??
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/23/2024 5:31:00 AM
Buwahahaha

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