Mildred Fled

Mildred fled when Joe asked her if she
would let him see 'below' for a fee. 
As she shot to a run
though, thread caught and unspun...
So instead, Joe got showed it for free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:15 PM
This is very clever and well thought out Lycia. Congratulations on your deserving win! Happy New Year!
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 5:08 PM
very clever and witty Lycia many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Ha ha, very cute, congratulations on your winning placement!
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 9:09 AM
That is disturbingly cute, Alycia. LOL
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 5:18 AM
LOL Good one! :)
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