migrating birds

autumn's palette
dawning morning
fight
ride golden sun rays'
flaxen horizon
heaven bound

migrating birds
V formation
tranquil redolence
fragrance
dance among tender
watercolor jewels
as their voices
    echo

3-3-2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 7:30 PM
"Autumn's palette". What imagery. I love to write about nature because it gives us so many ideas, doesn't it? "Watercolor jewels" is my favorite line in your beautiful seasonal poem. Although it was very hard to decide which was my favorite.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 8:23 AM
I really like this one. Very descriptive and telling of a place in time. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 3:39 AM
they sound beautiful wish I could be watching them from your end of the world, sharing a cuppa, thanks Eve, for the years of friendship, and love xo
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 5:04 AM
- Nice to see that V - formation...everyone keeps their place in the flight ... a lovely poem, Eve :) - hugs
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