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migrating birds

autumn's palette dawning morning fight ride golden sun rays' flaxen horizon heaven bound migrating birds V formation tranquil redolence fragrance dance among tender watercolor jewels as their voices echo 3-3-2024

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/14/2024 7:30:00 PM

"Autumn's palette". What imagery. I love to write about nature because it gives us so many ideas, doesn't it? "Watercolor jewels" is my favorite line in your beautiful seasonal poem. Although it was very hard to decide which was my favorite.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2024 8:23:00 AM

I really like this one. Very descriptive and telling of a place in time. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/5/2024 3:39:00 AM

they sound beautiful wish I could be watching them from your end of the world, sharing a cuppa, thanks Eve, for the years of friendship, and love xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2024 5:04:00 AM

- Nice to see that V - formation...everyone keeps their place in the flight ... a lovely poem, Eve :) - hugs