Migrating

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MIGRATING Juana and I sit on the fence, swing our legs, throw seeds for birds, check nests for eggs. Juana, like the migrating bird that traveled mile upon mile, is here now too, but I hope she stays longer than the bird that flew.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 6:30:00 AM

Such sweet words for the little guys on their journeys and for dear Juana. Very expressive! Linda

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/9/2022 12:15:00 PM

Your analogies are excellent, and your poetry is really well-written. Thank you, Raven, for stopping by my page and leaving a comment on my poem Quietness. I hope you will get the opportunity to read some of my other writing. I'm delighted to have established a fresh line of communication with you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/6/2022 3:15:00 PM

Your imagery is so gentle and beautiful, I love your verse, thank you for sharing your heart felt story