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Migrating

MIGRATING

Juana and I sit on the fence,
swing our legs,
throw seeds for birds,
check nests for eggs.

Juana,
like the migrating bird
that traveled mile upon mile,
is here now too,
but I hope she stays longer
than the bird that flew.

8th gradebirdfeelingsfriendshipfree verse

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Linda Alice Fowler

July 22, 2022 at 6:30 AM

Such sweet words for the little guys on their journeys and for dear Juana. Very expressive! Linda

Sotto Poet

May 9, 2022 at 12:15 PM

Your analogies are excellent, and your poetry is really well-written. Thank you, Raven, for stopping by my page and leaving a comment on my poem Quietness. I hope you will get the opportunity to read some of my other writing. I'm delighted to have established a fresh line of communication with you.