Migrant

silhouette afar first seen thrush in withered paddy lone warrior

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 10:34:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Noriko. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/13/2011 9:49:00 AM

this is great! very good images, I can see this scene;)

Stephen Parker

Date: 1/13/2011 7:47:00 AM

Good images of migrating entities! A nice grouping of the natural and human worlds on the move!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2011 7:39:00 AM

Nice and lovely haiku on the migrant, Noriko

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/13/2011 5:55:00 AM

Noriko This is lovely, some beautiful images of the silhouette in the distance, the thrush feathers in a withered paddy field, a lone warrior, yes, I agree, migration must be hard work:))