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Wrote this while having a migraine attack, somedays the pain is too much, and pills a reality, that I can't get rid of. I feel for all those who suffer from Migraine and any pain or sickness.

My mind spirals with murky metaphors In kaleidoscopic circles where Graphite moon-walks through magnified pain Reaching a piercing sphere noisier than A whirling maelstrom wrapped In fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion Neon green stars amidst chaotic intrusion Engrossed in pills and throbbing tribulation Maybe these flawed verses would Undress the crippling reality of a Shadowed poetess drowning in distress Inking torment from unsolicited riddles Numbness that riots into the Gates of a crystalline glass library Sanctuary of throes in unfinished prose

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Valsa George

Date: 10/13/2023 12:06:00 AM

How intense is your musings on the torment of migraine. Even such a tortuous feeling can be conveyed so powerfully by a gifted poet. "A whirling maelstrom wrapped In fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion". With this line you have nailed it, my friend. This is exactly how I used to feel when I had migrane attacks for long years. Fortunately I am completely relieved of it now after reaching a certain age. Dear Empress, I feel for you and pray for you to get freed of it at the earliest ! This acrostic is so impeccable clothed in the right words and expressions making one truly have a clear idea of what kind of a scourge, the migrane victims pass through.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 8:51:00 PM

This is one of the best Acrostic poems I've ever read, Ink. I've never had migraine headaches myself but have family members that suffer from them. I'm praying for healing from this suffering, my friend. The pills and medications in general usually make me more creative, but the pain involved I want no part of. Try to get some rest, maybe that will help. A concerned friend in Texas, Bill

Fading Star Silence

Date: 10/10/2023 3:04:00 PM

The fact that you produce no less than your usual breathtaking ways of weaving words, whether through migraine attacks or blocked moments of numbness, is truly a marvel to me! Lines you weave are truly like no other words I’ve had the honor to read and feel, the diverse ways your mind and heart works makes me wish I could look into it deeply, my beautiful soul sis! It’s such an honor to be a part of your writing and life journey right by your side, lovely, graceful, thoughtful, selfless soul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2023 12:48:00 PM

So sorry you have to feel this. I too have chronic suffering and there is nobody in my entire state who it seems can help me because my conditions are so rare that nobody has even heard of them. I had a really bad headache only a few times in my life and they were so horrible, I can't imagine living with them day to day. Hope there is some kind of pill for you. I take something but it really does not help!

Michael Huch

Date: 10/9/2023 9:24:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words and congratulations on my contest win. I feel validated by our community and I've needed a place to call home my entire life. thank you, Michael Thomas Huch

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 5:56:00 AM

It was my absolute pleasure supporting you, and very kind of you to visit my page too. Thank you so much truly

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/9/2023 8:06:00 PM

Magically creating the poignant atmosphere of a migraine attack, arousing deep empathy and understanding for those who so suffer. Superbly penned as always, IE

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 5:59:00 AM

Thank you seeker always grateful

Paige Hind

Date: 10/9/2023 6:27:00 PM

Beautifully written! You enchant my mind, beautiful poetess!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:11:00 AM

You are so sweet beautiful poetess I appreciate you

The Situation

Date: 10/9/2023 6:23:00 PM

Had to see what would come out. I look for poetry, colors, and big words. Only one of these has meaning to me.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:17:00 AM

Theres no big words here, unfortunately, thank you for checking

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/9/2023 11:15:00 AM

Dearest Inky! Even through pain you create amazing images of stunning awesome! Phrases like "unsolicited riddles," "kaleidoscopic circles," "fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion" just blow me away with their inventiveness and poetic beauty. I pray that this pain will subside quickly for you and healing will replace this debilitating condition! Sending you blessings of relief and peace!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:18:00 AM

Awwn. Beautiful soul! You are so kind and sweet thank you so much, i am fine right now, migraines can be so hard to get rid of sigh. I am so grateful for your prayers. You are the best

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/9/2023 7:26:00 AM

You created a piece of art through the pain. Creative descriptions, and it's even acrostic. I seldom get migraines, (when my neck is out, stress, or covid) but I can relate. Poetic hugs.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, yes when i got my covid shots my migraines did get worse. Appreciate your visit truly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2023 7:04:00 AM

When I was coming down with COVID two years back. I had my regular appointment with my doctor that was already scheduled and I told him I was having the worst headache(didn't know it was COVID). He said it was migraine giving me samples of Nurtec. I got nauseated because of the COVID and because that was a side effect. Something happened during the night and I felt a relief from the headache so that one might work for you. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:23:00 AM

Thank you dear kind Sara for sharing your experience with migraines, im so sorry you had covid, it must have been so hard for you, i noticed during my covid shots my migraines were worse, now it does get bad when i get stressed etc. ive never tried nurtec or maybe i did during worst episodes i rush to the emergency. I appreciate you always sharing your experience and thoughts so sincerely. Grateful

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/9/2023 6:49:00 AM

Despite the agony of pain, you delivered a meaningful write people can relate to. Eloquently expressed, Ink. This line sums it well for the fine poet in you: Sanctuary of throes in unfinished prose.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:24:00 AM

Ah Vijay thank you so very much always for your kindness and for your poetic support im forever grateful

Christopher Grieves

Date: 10/9/2023 6:01:00 AM

Not a poem that anyone wants to write from first hand, and yet this is strangely beautiful. As you articulate the moment, I feel a connection and insight to you in your suffering. This is what good poetry does from the depths of human experience. I wish you all the healing x

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:27:00 AM

Thank you christopher, for your constant and kind support i am truly grateful. And yes it is not easy, but i get migraine attacks very often, unfortunately. I appreciate your well wishes too so very much

Tom Woody

Date: 10/9/2023 5:54:00 AM

Sorry for your pain. I know quite a few who suffer, to a greater or lesser degree. How you managed to write this awesome acrostic is beyond imagining. Thank you for gracing us with your poetry

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for your well wishes always grateful

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/9/2023 5:39:00 AM

well this sums it up in very creative language..i sympathise, as i too suffer from migraines, and they tend to last for two or three days

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:34:00 AM

Oh same, sigh, a day without migraine is a day i celebrate. Yes they do last two to three days but sometimes i cant stop my mind from working so i write. Some of my poems i write whilst having one other times i just cant even open my eyes. I appreciate u visiting and sympathizing and im so sorry you get migraines too,

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/9/2023 4:44:00 AM

a stunning Acrostic, dearest Ink. After reading your words, I can understand the migraine pain and its impact on your writing spirit. Your words beautifully describe something that is so beautiful. Your words gave me pause. 'In kaleidoscopic circles' was a powerful and engaging line. Knowing about your migraines creates more admiration for you. What strength you and your muse must have. Sending you a comforting hug for the day, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:45:00 AM

Thank you beautiful soul i am always grateful for you, and your well wishes and empathy. You are truly a blessing!

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/9/2023 3:31:00 AM

My mind spirals with murky metaphors ..Graphite moon-walks through magnified pain… ooo the imagery is amazing!!! Shadowed poetess drowning in distress !! Ayooo u drowning aeee!!! It’s ok I bring u oil!!! And some sunscreen also !!! Gorgeous piece papi.. a perfect peek into the mind of an outstanding poetess with migraine!!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:54:00 AM

Papi thank u for always being there for me i appreciate u

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/9/2023 3:12:00 AM

This reminds me of the times I couldn't sleep for days (I'm bipolar) and I must take pills who offer me something normal beyond the mania. I love this friend. Prayers for your migraine attacks. God bless you, love, Gina

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:56:00 AM

Dear Gina! Happy world’s mental health day! I wish you always easy sleep, Sleep is the most difficult for individuals with bipolar disorder. And i just posted a poem about bipolar disorder to celebrate today. I thank u always for ur support and well wishes

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:56:00 AM

And i agree with sara i admire how you write despite taking medicines as i know few who cant write after taking medication! You are truly a warrior

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/9/2023 4:44:00 AM

My goodness, Gina...I admire your ability to create poetry given your situation. It's hard when pills are our reality. I understand. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/9/2023 2:11:00 AM

Woah, I didn't know that something as eloquent and poetic could be written about migraine and during suffering through it..Gosh! Ink, you're a true talented angel who always can bring beauty even to emotional and dark writes and those that are written about diseases/disorders/pain. I'm so sorry you've to face migraine, I know it's so terrible as my mum also has troubles bcz of migraine. I feel you completely..And this acrostic poem is absolutely brilliant "Graphite moon-walks", "fluorescent fogs

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thank you sweet soul your mom has a lot in common with me i suppose u make my simple acrostic even sound beautiful with ur comments thank u always for being there

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/9/2023 2:13:00 AM

"Neon green stars amidst chaotic intrusion", "Engrossed in pills and throbbing tribulation", "Inking torment from unsolicited riddles", "Gates of a crystalline glass library" Even though your metaphors might turn murky amidst magnified pain, but they will never lose their eloquence, because you breathe poesy! Always keep writing and shining, you're a true inspiration for me :)