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Wrote this while having a migraine attack, somedays the pain is too much, and pills a reality, that I can't get rid of. I feel for all those who suffer from Migraine and any pain or sickness.

Migraine Musings

My mind spirals with murky metaphors 
In kaleidoscopic circles where
Graphite moon-walks through magnified pain
Reaching a piercing sphere noisier than
A whirling maelstrom wrapped
In fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion 
Neon green stars amidst chaotic intrusion
Engrossed in pills and throbbing tribulation

Maybe these flawed verses would
Undress the crippling reality of a 
Shadowed poetess drowning in distress 
Inking torment from unsolicited riddles
Numbness that riots into the
Gates of a crystalline glass library
Sanctuary of throes in unfinished prose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 12:06 AM
How intense is your musings on the torment of migraine. Even such a tortuous feeling can be conveyed so powerfully by a gifted poet. "A whirling maelstrom wrapped In fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion". With this line you have nailed it, my friend. This is exactly how I used to feel when I had migrane attacks for long years. Fortunately I am completely relieved of it now after reaching a certain age. Dear Empress, I feel for you and pray for you to get freed of it at the earliest ! This acrostic is so impeccable clothed in the right words and expressions making one truly have a clear idea of what kind of a scourge, the migrane victims pass through.
Baker Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 8:51 PM
This is one of the best Acrostic poems I've ever read, Ink. I've never had migraine headaches myself but have family members that suffer from them. I'm praying for healing from this suffering, my friend. The pills and medications in general usually make me more creative, but the pain involved I want no part of. Try to get some rest, maybe that will help. A concerned friend in Texas, Bill
Silence Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:04 PM
The fact that you produce no less than your usual breathtaking ways of weaving words, whether through migraine attacks or blocked moments of numbness, is truly a marvel to me! Lines you weave are truly like no other words I’ve had the honor to read and feel, the diverse ways your mind and heart works makes me wish I could look into it deeply, my beautiful soul sis! It’s such an honor to be a part of your writing and life journey right by your side, lovely, graceful, thoughtful, selfless soul
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 12:48 PM
So sorry you have to feel this. I too have chronic suffering and there is nobody in my entire state who it seems can help me because my conditions are so rare that nobody has even heard of them. I had a really bad headache only a few times in my life and they were so horrible, I can't imagine living with them day to day. Hope there is some kind of pill for you. I take something but it really does not help!
Huch Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Thank you for your kind words and congratulations on my contest win. I feel validated by our community and I've needed a place to call home my entire life. thank you, Michael Thomas Huch
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 5:56 AM
It was my absolute pleasure supporting you, and very kind of you to visit my page too. Thank you so much truly
Seeker Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:06 PM
Magically creating the poignant atmosphere of a migraine attack, arousing deep empathy and understanding for those who so suffer. Superbly penned as always, IE
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Thank you seeker always grateful
Hind Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Beautifully written! You enchant my mind, beautiful poetess!
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:11 AM
You are so sweet beautiful poetess I appreciate you
Situation Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Had to see what would come out. I look for poetry, colors, and big words. Only one of these has meaning to me.
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Theres no big words here, unfortunately, thank you for checking
Kauffman Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Dearest Inky! Even through pain you create amazing images of stunning awesome! Phrases like "unsolicited riddles," "kaleidoscopic circles," "fluorescent fogs of frosty confusion" just blow me away with their inventiveness and poetic beauty. I pray that this pain will subside quickly for you and healing will replace this debilitating condition! Sending you blessings of relief and peace!
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Awwn. Beautiful soul! You are so kind and sweet thank you so much, i am fine right now, migraines can be so hard to get rid of sigh. I am so grateful for your prayers. You are the best
Ligon Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:26 AM
You created a piece of art through the pain. Creative descriptions, and it's even acrostic. I seldom get migraines, (when my neck is out, stress, or covid) but I can relate. Poetic hugs.
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, yes when i got my covid shots my migraines did get worse. Appreciate your visit truly
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:04 AM
When I was coming down with COVID two years back. I had my regular appointment with my doctor that was already scheduled and I told him I was having the worst headache(didn't know it was COVID). He said it was migraine giving me samples of Nurtec. I got nauseated because of the COVID and because that was a side effect. Something happened during the night and I felt a relief from the headache so that one might work for you. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Thank you dear kind Sara for sharing your experience with migraines, im so sorry you had covid, it must have been so hard for you, i noticed during my covid shots my migraines were worse, now it does get bad when i get stressed etc. ive never tried nurtec or maybe i did during worst episodes i rush to the emergency. I appreciate you always sharing your experience and thoughts so sincerely. Grateful
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Despite the agony of pain, you delivered a meaningful write people can relate to. Eloquently expressed, Ink. This line sums it well for the fine poet in you: Sanctuary of throes in unfinished prose.
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Ah Vijay thank you so very much always for your kindness and for your poetic support im forever grateful
Grieves Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Not a poem that anyone wants to write from first hand, and yet this is strangely beautiful. As you articulate the moment, I feel a connection and insight to you in your suffering. This is what good poetry does from the depths of human experience. I wish you all the healing x
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thank you christopher, for your constant and kind support i am truly grateful. And yes it is not easy, but i get migraine attacks very often, unfortunately. I appreciate your well wishes too so very much
Puddifoot Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:39 AM
well this sums it up in very creative language..i sympathise, as i too suffer from migraines, and they tend to last for two or three days
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Oh same, sigh, a day without migraine is a day i celebrate. Yes they do last two to three days but sometimes i cant stop my mind from working so i write. Some of my poems i write whilst having one other times i just cant even open my eyes. I appreciate u visiting and sympathizing and im so sorry you get migraines too,
Onpaper Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:31 AM
My mind spirals with murky metaphors ..Graphite moon-walks through magnified pain… ooo the imagery is amazing!!! Shadowed poetess drowning in distress !! Ayooo u drowning aeee!!! It’s ok I bring u oil!!! And some sunscreen also !!! Gorgeous piece papi.. a perfect peek into the mind of an outstanding poetess with migraine!!!!
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Papi thank u for always being there for me i appreciate u
Mcintosh Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:12 AM
This reminds me of the times I couldn't sleep for days (I'm bipolar) and I must take pills who offer me something normal beyond the mania. I love this friend. Prayers for your migraine attacks. God bless you, love, Gina
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Dear Gina! Happy world’s mental health day! I wish you always easy sleep, Sleep is the most difficult for individuals with bipolar disorder. And i just posted a poem about bipolar disorder to celebrate today. I thank u always for ur support and well wishes
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:56 AM
And i agree with sara i admire how you write despite taking medicines as i know few who cant write after taking medication! You are truly a warrior
Sharma  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Woah, I didn't know that something as eloquent and poetic could be written about migraine and during suffering through it..Gosh! Ink, you're a true talented angel who always can bring beauty even to emotional and dark writes and those that are written about diseases/disorders/pain. I'm so sorry you've to face migraine, I know it's so terrible as my mum also has troubles bcz of migraine. I feel you completely..And this acrostic poem is absolutely brilliant "Graphite moon-walks", "fluorescent fogs
Empress Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Thank you sweet soul your mom has a lot in common with me i suppose u make my simple acrostic even sound beautiful with ur comments thank u always for being there
Sharma  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:13 AM
"Neon green stars amidst chaotic intrusion", "Engrossed in pills and throbbing tribulation", "Inking torment from unsolicited riddles", "Gates of a crystalline glass library" Even though your metaphors might turn murky amidst magnified pain, but they will never lose their eloquence, because you breathe poesy! Always keep writing and shining, you're a true inspiration for me :)
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