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Migraine

The automobile breezes down the liquorice whip, nonpareil dotted roadway as the searing sun strobes lances through the frozen forest; piercing projections, phospheneal auras, dance as retinal afterthoughts within the cornea of man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2009 5:54:00 PM
wow what a mouth full. effective however
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Date: 2/16/2009 1:45:00 PM
Deborah this truly is a wonderful write - Thoughts very well expressed - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/15/2009 5:16:00 PM
I get migraines, too, so I can relate to this. Nice write, Deborah! Donna
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Date: 2/15/2009 1:23:00 PM
well penned.. excellent
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Date: 2/15/2009 10:47:00 AM
The imagery is excellent in this, Debbie. I can feel the stabbing pain from the sun in piercing brightness and that ill feeling that comes with it. Great work, my poetic friend! Love and hugs, Robin
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