Mighty Mighty Spider

Now usually when a spider finds its way into my home
I squash it right away saying, hey my space alone

But one day I came upon a fuzzy little spider there upon my dryer
Frantically running up and down the chrome strip which looked like a mirror

He bravely reared up and fought this villain in his way
Up and down this battle raged a good part of the day

I laughed so hard my stomach hurt, but he didn't care
He boldly continued his plight, the enemy was near

The battle over and he's laying still, I wonder to myself
Was it victory? Or was he awaiting his pending death?

I gently took him outside and placed him on a tree
And told him, you're the mightiest little spider I ever did see

©Donna Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fraser Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Aw, cute little poem. I love it Donna, it sure made me chuckle. Thanks kindly for your kind words, James xx
Duncan Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Love it,,,,, when I find spiders in my house, I get a tall plastic glass" ones they give you drinks in at the fair. And catch them and throw them out side ;}
Hunter Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 11:30 AM
This one was too fun!...at least you gave him a fighting chance....I'da squashed him.
Jones Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:28 PM
Oh I doubt it...you would have been laughing at him too...up on his back legs fighting with his front ones being all tough...thanks for stopping Caleb...
Delaney Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Oh! I love this amusing little tale I quite enjoy 'spider-watching' wether in real life, or through the eyes of another poet.....you made my day. SuZ
Jones Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:28 PM
Thanks..glad you enjoyed ..Donna
Austin Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Yes. I have rescued a number of daddy-long-legs from my shower. They dare not get those skinny legs wet. As for big black spiders - no way! Enjoyed. I wrote a couple of spider things myself. LOve, Daver
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Thanks for stopping...glad you enjoyed...Donna
Liwayway Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:44 AM
very imaginative poem my friend Donna. I like it..thanks for sharing.Good day.
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Maria...hope it made you smile...it was a funny little spider...Donna
Jordan Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Nice imagery. I'm glad you set him free. Jack
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 9:35 AM
I had to, he was a brave little spider!..thanks Jack
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:27 PM
this is very cute. you had compassion on the mighty spider. Cool!!
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Yeah Andrea,,,I had to...he made me laugh....raising up like that fighting himself....it was great...
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:27 PM
It sure was funny watching him fight his reflection..I've seen cats and dogs do it it never a spider!!! Thanks for stopping Russell...Donna
Sivey Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 2:56 PM
My wife gets rid of all the spiders here, and we have our share out in the country! I'm deathly afraid of them, I can't stand the sight of them! I enjoyed your confrontation you had with this mighty spider my friend! What a glorious poem! Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:29 PM
I not know why my replies jump around but here we go again...it was funny watching him fight his reflection. I've seen cats and dogs do it but never a spider...thanks..Russell.
O'Leary Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Yeah... Spiders like living too... Terry
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Yeah and fighting too....it was cool....and funny...thanks..for stopping by
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