Notes About The Poem

Reference:

Genesis 35:16-21

Micah 4:8

Luke 2:8-14

 

These passages and the mention of Migdal Eder which caught my attention and imagination.       

 

Background:

In Chapter 6 of The Life and Times of Jesus Messiah, Alfred Edersheim (1899) wrote: 

And yet Jewish tradition may here prove both illustrative and helpful. That the Messiah was to be born in Bethlehem, was a settled conviction.

Equally so, was the belief, that He was to be revealed from Migdal Eder, ‘the tower of the flock.’ This Migdal Eder was not the watchtower for the ordinary flocks which pastured on the barren sheep ground beyond Bethlehem, but lay close to the town, on the road to Jerusalem.  A passage in the Mishnah leads to the conclusion, that the flocks, which pastured there, were destined for Temple-sacrifices, and, accordingly, that the shepherds, who watched over them, were not ordinary shepherds.

The same Mishnaic passage also leads us to infer, that these flocks lay out all the year round, since they are spoken of as in the fields thirty days before Passover–that is, in the month of February, when in Palestine [Israel] the average rainfall is nearly greatest.

Thus, Jewish tradition in some dim manner apprehended the first revelation of the Messiah from that Migdal Eder, where shepherds watched the Temple-flocks all the year round. Of the deep symbolic significance of such a coincidence, it is needless to speak.

 

So my poem – from pashcal lambs to the Pashcal Lamb – Migdal Eder.

Migdal Eder

Muscles locked in agony
Every ligament burning 
Pain flooding nerve endings
Labor
Heavy panting of breath
Heart pumping trying to keep up

Behind the canopy of human perception 
Life and Death dance
  
On her knees pushing
Two women holding her
A third with hands out

Down, down . . . blood, sweat
Water – tears
A tearing and a swoosh
A boy, cover in blood
Cries into the wind
Life laughs with delight

Rachel in a panting whisper
Ben-Oni – his    n a  m   
                                      e
Dies

Death – laughs defiantly 
Echoes across this luscious valley 
Livestock pause from eating
Shepherds watch
Jacob climbs Migal Eder
Grief cries fill the valley

*** 1000 years later ******

A small wiry man from Moresheth
Deeply troubled 
Spoke about justice
The coming of doom
But also of hope

Micah climbs – Migal Eder
Watchtower of the flock
Cries --  “Daughter of Zion”
Listen . . . 
“Daughter of Jerusalem”
Hear my words

“Bethlehem Ephrathah
Small among the mighty clans of Judah
From within you
A ruler over Israel – a shepherd
From the beginning of days
Of ancient time
The restorer of Peace”

*****  700 years later ******

Too many people
No rooms
Tired, frustrated, worried
The pain  . . . 
Life and death begin to dance
She yells
J-O-S--E---P---H  !!!!!

In the distance
A tower
Fire
“Hang on Mary”
Almost there

Panting prayer- Y a h w e h!!! 
Father of this great hurt!
P – L – E – A – S – E 
Release your son – NOW!!

Down
Upon her knees 
A depression of earth
A pair of hands
Pushing with all her might
Gritted teeth, white lips pressed wide

A tearing of maidenhood
A breaching of flesh – blood burst forth
Within the blood – an infant
Relief

Cool air – Life dances upon the breeze
Death shaken, slinks away
Breast, milk, a swaddling
A mother’s love
Under Migal Eder
Watchtower of the Flock
Resting in a manger

Across the valley
A bright light
Music – “Glory to God in the highest . . .”
A new shepherd
A paschal lamb
J E S U S



Live and Love Generously


David Meade
12/19/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 10:36 PM
A beautiful painting, David,,, <3 everyone has said it all ... Hugs Eve
Ball Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Words cannot express how much this touched me. What an informative and beautifully written piece this is. Generally when I'm really impressed I give a 10 from one to seven but I think this deserves a 100% This one I want to copy and save with your permission. God Bless, JB
Meade Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Thank-you for your kind words. You may use my poem however you deem appropriate. It was fun to try and capture history -- so many years, so much love. All the best, chasing the light.
Onclaud Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 3:57 AM
this gives me anew perspective of Jesus' coming..wonderfully crafted, david..huggs
Daniel Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 1:24 AM
This wonderful poem is the result of a deep research, thank you for the insight into Lord Jesus' birth:) excellent writing, David:) a 10 from me:)
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Hi Jo, your visit and comments are much appreciated. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Merry Christmas
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 11:50 PM
wow, DAvid, I never saw one about His birth like THIS before. VEry nice how you went through history that way!! You put a lot of effort into this one and it paid off!
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thank-you Ms. Dietrich, you brought a smile to my face. Merry Christmas -- hope to see sunflowers dancing in the new year!
Bateman Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Hello David!! A most wonderful and truly uplifting write. I'm "ditto" with Eileen's comments below. The historical context and backdrop are spot on. Extraordinary Work here David. A FAV!! Merry Christmas!! Gary
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Hello Greenleaf, you are a true friend! May your limbs all be full of sap and your pen full of ink . . . Merry Christmas Friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Beautiful and meaningful. I enjoyed how you provided historical context at the beginning.
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Merry Christmas Richard -- I am honored by your visit. I do believe the historical context is important -- Christ entered our history. All the best my friend.
Callus Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM
An excellent rendition of the fulfillment of the Bible in stages, David! Both your notes and Eileen's comment leave me with little else to add. ~ Wishing you a truly joyous and blessed Christmas. ~ Regards // paul
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank-you Paul for stopping by -- I always appreciate your comments and support. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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December 19, 2016 at 1:43 PM
- Christmas message written in a powerful new way in 2016, a wonderful poem David - Best wishes for a blessed Christmas in peace and joy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thank-you Sunshine -- love the name!! Wishing you a Merry Christmas!
Manassian Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Sorry, Sunshine! My comment jumped! ;)
Manassian Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:46 PM
The symbolism is amazing. He was the lamb without blemish...the sacrificial Lamb...the One who takes the sins of the world upon Him. His people didn't even catch the significance of Migdal Eder...I'm glad you have. There is such depth and beauty in those messianic prophecies and customs. The fulfillment was in Jesus.
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December 19, 2016 at 1:41 PM
I'm THRILLED to read this. Such a beautiful insight into the meaning of the title....Jesus...Immanuel...God with us. LOVELY write, David. I have missed you so much!!! Welcome back, my dear. Wish you an amazing Christmas with family and loved ones....LO
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Hi LO, I knew you would get all the symbolism . . . you made me smile reading all of your wonderful responses. You are awesome. Big hugs my dear friend. Love Generously
Manassian Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM
ooooppsss...My comment jumped to Anne Lise...When Jesus was crucified...the temple curtain was torn in two by unseen hands. There was no longer a need for animal sacrifice. No more need for the symbolic slaughtering of lambs. The LAMB had been slain for the remission of sin. Lovely reminder. Thanks for this piece of beauty...Blessings, Coach! Love from LO
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