Midway Scarlet November Corridor


Lustrous laureled leaves in autumn silently reap,
Brown bland blisters of trampled grey soil in bay,
Glorious golden glee blankets my dreams in sleep.

Withered warm whispers in wet pastures seep,
Midway merging November winds to Winter neigh,
Lustrous laureled leaves in autumn silently reap.

Thousand tattered treasures revive slumber deep,
Calm crispy corridor covers secrets on the way,
Glorious golden glee blankets my dreams in sleep

Silver sumptuous snow solaces them who weep,
Intense iridescent incarnations of life each day,
Lustrous laureled leaves in autumn silently reap.

Wonderful white wisps wake desires, oh they leap,
Emerged effervescent existence born to fly away,
Glorious golden glee blankets my dreams in sleep.

Magnificent miraculous moments I joyously keep,
Frosty ferocious fears, fervent furling hopes sleigh,
Lustrous laureled leaves in autumn silently reap,
Glorious golden glee blankets my dreams in sleep.



June 21, 2020

Month of the year I like most Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani
~Premiere Contest Winner: 5th Place

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Date: 7/27/2020 6:58:00 AM
Back with congrats on your wonderful win my friend. You never miss a beat! A stunning write from your gifted pen, Aditi.
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Date: 7/18/2020 5:56:00 PM
Coming back to catch another read of your inspiring pen, and wish you a heartfelt congratulations for your wonderful win, Aditi. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 7/18/2020 11:13:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win with this amazing write, Aditi!
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Date: 7/18/2020 7:58:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 7/18/2020 1:09:00 AM
Aditi, what can I say. Speechless for the marvellous muses that are currently flowing from your mind, heart, & pen. Keep it up. In this very contest too, your muse places high. 'withered warm whispers in wet pastures seep' and more such lines-- what beautiful imagery of November in alliteration. Any personal occasion apart from the season in November? Keep us enthralled with more of your fine muses. Best. Mohan
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Date: 6/24/2020 1:47:00 AM
I love your villanelle poem, Aditi! Lovely alliteration adds to a scenic November landscape you paint. Favorite line is "Lustrous laureled leaves in autumn silently reap". Best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Date: 6/24/2020 9:22:00 AM
Glad you love it John. Yes that line was the first image I had in my mind when I thought of November. Thank you for observing and appreciating it. Blessings :)
Date: 6/22/2020 10:41:00 PM
So stirringly evocative of that golden autumn month (I was born in November so of course it is close to my heart) I think I like 'Thousand tattered treasures revive slumber deep' the best, though it is hard to pick a favorite line - should do well in the contest!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 2:00:00 AM
I am glad you could relate my words and love them. Thank you for your kind appreciation Michelle. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 7:07:00 PM
Fantastic alliterative vinialle my friend!
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Date: 6/23/2020 1:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren :) Love
Date: 6/21/2020 7:08:00 PM
Stunningly sublime! A top winner in my book, Aditi:-) Best of luck, dear friend!
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:54:00 AM
Oh I am so honored by your appreciation Edward! Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you :)
Date: 6/21/2020 3:27:00 PM
what a wonderful poem you have mastered this challenging form so brilliantly!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:54:00 AM
Glad you love my words Jan! Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/21/2020 2:17:00 PM
this is very lovely
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation Jack :)
Date: 6/21/2020 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful write, dear friend. Love and prayers for you - keep writing amazing poetry, Blessings, Gina
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you for your love and gracious words of appreciation Gina :) Blessings and love
Date: 6/21/2020 2:03:00 PM
Oh wow... This is a difficult form, but you have done it so well.. love the alliteration... This enhances it.. looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:32:00 AM
Honored to receive such a generous appreciation from you. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings :)
Date: 6/21/2020 12:14:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Aditi--enjoyed the happy rhythm of your poem.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:32:00 AM
Glad you love my words Vijay. Thank you :) Blessings
Date: 6/21/2020 12:09:00 PM
Very well composed Aditi, not the easiest form I've found, Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:31:00 AM
Glad you love it Tom. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings :)
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