Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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Mid-Summer Night Dream - Concluded

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Concluded

Elves, dwarves, mini giants, and hobbits all performed.
But last was Fili as he strutted to the middle of the glen.
Secretly clutching his alexandrite lode, he flew 
Straight up ten feet with a view for all to see.
Fireflies flew erratically around him, a ghostly shine.
As Fili moved his clutched hand, he turned.
Somersaulted, spun and returned to his standing stance.
Below the people of the glen clapped in awe.
But now Fili was worried, how was he to descend
And thus receive his well merited prize?
It was the River-maid who rescued him, as she flew
And whispered in his ear.  Change the lode to the left hand
She whispered, giving him a luscious kiss.
Soon Fili landed and the Fairy Queen beckoned him.
You can take your first midnight skinny dipping and eat all
The strawberries you like so much, she graciously said.
She took his lode, put it on a crown and on his head it sat.
And now Fili, the hero, was annoyed no more.

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Beryl Edmonds August 27, 2022 at 11:55 AM Enjoyed the conclusion to your story/poem very much Victor, it was a wonderful ending, so happy for Fili… Belle

Michael Tor August 26, 2022 at 9:21 PM Victor your imagination is wonderfully expressed and it is a joy to read my friend. Superb conclusion. Hope you are well my friend and God bless you...

Charles Messina August 25, 2022 at 3:47 AM Cool story, Victor. Filled with excitement and detail. Well done my friend.

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 1:39 PM what a delightful conclusion you put on your story.

Mystic Rose Rose August 24, 2022 at 3:55 AM Would love to see this fantasy story written out in a book, lovely write Victor, have a precious day , love !

Delice Arleen Skelly August 24, 2022 at 3:00 AM Eating your fill of strawberries is a happy thought, skinny dipping? think I will miss that delight lol....Delice

Eve Roper August 23, 2022 at 10:07 PM Well , skinny dipping and a taste of strawberries. Well done, Victor..

Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2022 at 7:28 AM LOL…hohoho… You can take your first midnight skinny dipping and eat all The strawberries you like so much

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2022 at 7:01 AM Creative work you have invented in this one. I wonder if you heard Fairy, elves and hobbit stories as a child? Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit August 23, 2022 at 4:23 AM A magical mystical story--you had me spellbound reading this conclusion, Victor.

Anitha Jayasankar August 23, 2022 at 3:29 AM Loved this concluding part too Victor... at last he got to show something spectacular and was rewarded too for that... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Unseeking Seeker August 23, 2022 at 2:14 AM Hahaha! Kiss has to be a part of your poems always ~ that too, a luscious one

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 22, 2022 at 10:41 PM A charming ending to a fascinating tale! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem, Victor, especially Fili's flight and his reward. :)

Sotto Poet August 22, 2022 at 9:33 PM Victor, We are grateful for transporting us to this magical country filled with dwarfs, gnomes, and witches. An exciting and successful ending to Fili's adventure! Now, may the wreath remain affixed to his forehead for a good long time!

Valsa George August 22, 2022 at 7:15 PM A victorious conclusion to Fili's escapade ! Now let the crown sit on his head for long ! Victor, thank you for taking us to the wonderland of fairies, elves and dwarves.