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Mid-Summer Night Dream

Once upon a time in the land of the Hobbits, 
Fili was annoyed.  He wanted excitement.
He was the youngest of the twelve dwarves,
Dressed in a blue cloak and sporting a yellow beard,
He entered into his tree house in an angry mood.
Up in the attic he sat on a stool and pondered.
That night all fairyland would celebrate 
The great feast of Midsummer.  And everyone
Would parade his oft practiced skills.
Alas Fili had nothing spectacular to show.

In the dim light of the attic he spied a shine.
Fili had the best eyesight and somehow knew
There below the cupboard lay an alexandrite lode.
It shone and magic oozed out of it.
What could it be?  He grabbed it and saw
A parchment with strange signs he could not understand.
Yet in the bottom was written so very clear:
Use me to fly, turn, swirl, but you must
Understand the signs or suffer you will.

A Catherine wheel opened the feast lightning the glen.
Immediately thousands upon thousands of fireflies
Flew around and illuminated the open grassy space.
Elves brought in the beer, sweetmeats, firewater.
The Firstborns danced around the Maypole,
Frog dances abounded as elves escorted the Fairy Queen
To her elaborated decorative throne.  She smiled 
And after a while she clapped her hers, and amid the clapping
She gave the sign that the much sought contest can start.


To be continued
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Tor Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:27 PM
Love your creativity Victor on to the second part...
Edmonds  Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 6:15 AM
A fascinating story Victor a most enjoyable read and I’m looking forward to the next instalment… Belle
Skelly Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 2:55 AM
Nice fantasy writing, Catherine wheel set off the festivities perfectly..Delice
Jayasankar Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 3:24 AM
This is an interesting story... I see that it has a second part too... Enjoyed reading Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Proxenos Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 1:59 PM
This is beautiful, exquisite, fascinating, great imagery, talented, I LOVE it Victor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 1:44 AM
I love whimsical stories... Lovely... Blessings
Seeker Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 11:06 PM
Magical! So this is the first of how many episodes?
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 11:15 PM
Two only.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 5:55 PM
Very nice, Victor! Looking forward to the next installment!
Rose  Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 1:25 PM
You have such a colorful imagination, I loved this one of my fav from you :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Whoa~~You leave us wondering. I agree with Andrea that this is very different from your usual works. I enjoyed reding it. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
M  Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Hi Victor… What a magical story ….loved it! Debx
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 8:40 AM
this is sure different from you. But I love how you got fireflies into this!!
Poet Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Victor, I was completely enthralled by your story. It is incredibly captivating. On the wings of your imagination, I had a great time soaring through this trip. Your story was successful at grabbing the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing.
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Much enjoyed this exploration on the wings of your imagination, Victor. A story that holds intrigue and attention of the reader. And the ending says more please!
May Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 4:49 AM
A midsummer feast with magic in the air, Very nicely penned Victor
George Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 12:28 AM
What a captivating tale. Your imagination flies high up. The tale narrated here captures the attention of the readers from start to finish ! Beautiful....dear Victor. (For two days, I will be away !)
Buehler Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 3:57 PM
I was captivated by this enchanting tale, Victor. It is so magical and delightful. I am awaiting part two with eagerness. Have a nice day. :)
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