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Midsummer Midnight

midsummer midnightand sweet dreams orchestra of crickets a steady snore blades spinning overhead moon tapping the blinds midsummer midnight eyes darting back & forth between fantasias and goosebumps, nebulosity between reality and surrealism midsummer midnight the court of inside & out each one, unknown to the other - a cup of joe extracts the residuals fog lifts with cream and a pour

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/19/2022 1:08:00 PM

Nice one Kim, so well put together too.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/17/2022 7:59:00 AM

Such a captivating poem my dear friend Kim and your title 'midsummer midnight' brings to mind the many delights that these two magic words make happen. Unique and well penned poem. Hugs, blessings, and love Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2022 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 7:42:00 AM

Your adjectives and descriptions were very engaging. I enjoyed the read, Kim. Write On! Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thank you, Bill!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/16/2022 7:01:00 AM

I like the voice of this midsummer midnight, Kim--especially impressed with the ending lines: the court of inside & out each one, unknown to the other - a cup of joe extracts the residuals-- fog lifts with cream and a pour

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2022 7:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2022 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay!