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Midst of the Forest

In the midst of the forest deep, Within evolving work of art, Wherein men's green edifice dream does Begin natures evensong heart. Old timber yielding whilst in still Hold fast, nestling mistral wind chants, Bold aroma of petrichor Fold upon pulse lands color plants. 1/20/2020 Poetry Contest: Writing Prompt- Let's Write A Lento- Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2020 1:47:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2020 5:52:00 PM

So colorful. Congrats on the win, eve

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/8/2020 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A forest is a peaceful place with birds singing. Enjoy your weekend..................

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2020 5:30:00 PM

I love how nature inspired your lento eve, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/22/2020 4:47:00 PM

Oh wow, beautifully penned, good luck in the contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/22/2020 2:11:00 PM

love this lento - you made it look so easy!

Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/22/2020 1:33:00 PM

Oooo first time I have come across a Lento, Eve, you have made a beautiful exquisite tale of life within the forest, enjoyed this very much . . . : )

Ann Foster

Date: 1/22/2020 7:36:00 AM

Lovely, simply beautiful. Ann

Charles Messina

Date: 1/22/2020 4:01:00 AM

Wonderful! Nicely penned, Eve. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/22/2020 3:54:00 AM

Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/21/2020 9:09:00 PM

"Begin natures evensong heart. " - this is so beautifully done, Eve. BRAVO!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2020 1:47:00 PM

Nature has inspired you well, Eve. I love being amongst the trees, and listening to mistral wind chants. Hugs // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/21/2020 6:47:00 AM

I love the evensong of nature and that of the heart, most of all the evensong of a poem such as this. Lovely poem Eve, hope your feeling better, sending love and prayers your way, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2020 5:30:00 AM

- Described with beauty, Eve ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/21/2020 5:18:00 AM

Mesmerizing poem painting the beauty of nature! Excellent dear Eve!