Midst of the Forest

In the midst of the forest deep, 
Within evolving work of art,
Wherein men's green edifice dream does  
Begin natures evensong heart. 

Old timber yielding whilst in still
Hold fast, nestling mistral wind chants, 
Bold aroma of petrichor
Fold upon pulse lands color plants.


1/20/2020
Poetry Contest:  Writing Prompt- Let's Write A Lento- 
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La France Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 5:52 PM
So colorful. Congrats on the win, eve
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Congratulations on your win. A forest is a peaceful place with birds singing. Enjoy your weekend..................
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:30 PM
I love how nature inspired your lento eve, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Oh wow, beautifully penned, good luck in the contest.
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:11 PM
love this lento - you made it look so easy!
Shaw Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Oooo first time I have come across a Lento, Eve, you have made a beautiful exquisite tale of life within the forest, enjoyed this very much . . . : )
Foster Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Lovely, simply beautiful. Ann
Messina Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 4:01 AM
Wonderful! Nicely penned, Eve. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie
Neumann Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
Krutsinger Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 9:09 PM
"Begin natures evensong heart. " - this is so beautifully done, Eve. BRAVO!
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Nature has inspired you well, Eve. I love being amongst the trees, and listening to mistral wind chants. Hugs // paul
Rose  Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 6:47 AM
I love the evensong of nature and that of the heart, most of all the evensong of a poem such as this. Lovely poem Eve, hope your feeling better, sending love and prayers your way, xo
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 5:30 AM
- Described with beauty, Eve ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 5:18 AM
Mesmerizing poem painting the beauty of nature! Excellent dear Eve!
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