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Optimizing freedom zest Challenging mother’s tidiness best My son whirls himself around Oblivious that he’s wheel-chair bound. Loosening mobility gear His spastic hands hurl things everywhere Zooming beyond glee’s ecstasy He’s waged war against my mess-flee policy. Entangled around disarray’s coil My mind screams, devoid of nagging turmoil Special child now wins over distress bouts Ending my heart chaos by his delightful shouts. *Resolved to blend patience and might I'm glad to see kid's milestone-height To God I give my thanks** and praise For His enabling grace midst orderliness-race.*
November 19, 2019 3rd place, "Disarray" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter; judged on 11/23/2019. *Last stanza added on November 25, 2019. **1Corinthians 15:57 But thanks be to God, which giveth us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ.

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Date: 11/25/2019 4:36:00 AM
Congrats to you, sweet lady. Bless you, Gina
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Beata!!
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:19:00 AM
This one is my favourite in the bunch, as Juliet said, this is precious. Congratulations for your win Beata! A fave for me too :) xomo
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:57:00 AM
This is precious. Congrats!
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:52:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Beata
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Date: 11/19/2019 7:36:00 AM
This intimate piece speaks of freedom and relationship. Challenges can become our greatest blessings. Life and love can be messy. ;0)
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