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Midst Disarray's Race

Optimizing freedom zest Challenging mother’s tidiness best My son whirls himself around Oblivious that he’s wheel-chair bound. Loosening mobility gear His spastic hands hurl things everywhere Zooming beyond glee’s ecstasy He’s waged war against my mess-flee policy. Entangled around disarray’s coil My mind screams, devoid of nagging turmoil Special child now wins over distress bouts Ending my heart chaos by his delightful shouts. *Resolved to blend patience and might I'm glad to see kid's milestone-height To God I give my thanks** and praise For His enabling grace midst orderliness-race.*
November 19, 2019 3rd place, "Disarray" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter; judged on 11/23/2019. *Last stanza added on November 25, 2019. **1Corinthians 15:57 But thanks be to God, which giveth us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ.
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Mcintosh Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 4:36 AM
Congrats to you, sweet lady. Bless you, Gina
Sergi Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations, Beata!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:19 AM
This one is my favourite in the bunch, as Juliet said, this is precious. Congratulations for your win Beata! A fave for me too :) xomo
Ligon Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 8:57 AM
This is precious. Congrats!
Na Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 3:52 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Beata
Lamoureux Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:36 AM
This intimate piece speaks of freedom and relationship. Challenges can become our greatest blessings. Life and love can be messy. ;0)
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