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Midnight's Song

Surge of soothing tones,
Pacifies the moon to sleep:
Silver lullabies.

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December 12, 2009 at 4:34 PM

Love the idea of the last line--so peaceful. Such a fitting end to this haiku. Good use of imagery and personification for a creative perspective. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your prayers. Karen

Abe Lopez

December 6, 2009 at 8:08 PM

pacifying the moon a great concept raul ..... very nice!

Sara Kendrick

December 3, 2009 at 3:52 AM

Interesting Haiku. When we think anything else can't be said then something else is said. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Elaine George

December 3, 2009 at 12:57 AM

WOW! WHAT AN IMAGE THIS BEAUTIFUL HAIKU EVOKES. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, RAUL. LAINIE

Marty Owens

December 2, 2009 at 10:13 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry tonight...Marty

James Peranteau

December 2, 2009 at 5:30 PM

Just so poetic Raul ! Great Haiku !!! james

Richard Pickett

December 2, 2009 at 12:30 PM

My eyelids are getting heavy now... Very nice write.Great flow Raul. God Bless... RdP

Juliane Thomas

December 1, 2009 at 1:50 PM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku, which is one of my favorite forms. I love the last line especially "Silver lullabies"... ~Juliane

Tyler Martin

December 1, 2009 at 1:24 PM

Nice ending to a wonderful haiku.

Danielle Moreno

December 1, 2009 at 1:22 PM

Great image of the ocean singing a lullaby to the moon.

Daniel Neal

December 1, 2009 at 1:20 PM

You make these look so simple, amazing work.

Chris Goombi

December 1, 2009 at 1:18 PM

Great last line, CG

Steve Edmonds

December 1, 2009 at 1:15 PM

Great description of your pic.

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 1, 2009 at 11:33 AM

Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Raul. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol