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Midnight's Braid - El

woven into midnights braid sunsets goodnight kiss charade bowing low for curtain call draped in heavens endless shawl warmth exhaled in cooling rise silent wings of butterflies woven into midnights braid ©7/9/2021 Elemental Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Midnight's Braid - EL" is a creative story/write. "Love it" Have a blessed day with your win...............

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 6:20:00 AM

Wonderfully written, John. Great rhythm and flow...Love the line "silent wings of butterflies" Congratulations on your winning poem! Charlie

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:37:00 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/17/2021 4:39:00 AM

This is wonderful. I love every line. God bless you always and I hope you're a winner. Love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2021 3:38:00 PM

this is just gorgeous, John!! Thanks for appreciating my poem even if you do not agree with me. Here is something I think everyone ought to see. It is from a reliable source, but I doubt anyone will even read it if I post it at FB: https://nworeport.me/2021/07/10/vaers-report-indicates-9000-experimental-covid-19-vaccine-related-deaths-a-2000-increase-in-one-week/

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 8:43:00 AM

absolutely wonderful John my fave of all the ones i've read!:-) hugs jan xx

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/9/2021 8:39:00 AM

Wow! Great entry for the contest!