Midnight Trysts Premiere Contest Winner

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She flees the marriage bed so many nights
to satisfy base urges while he sleeps.
Apparently, he doesn't know she fights
voracious appetites and often keeps
a rendezvous with kitchen's sweet delights.

Tonight her giant slab of mocha cake
is covered with a mountain of ice cream,
pistachio. Tomorrow night she'll make
another huge confectionary dream.
She sacrifices sleep for sugar's sake.

But then she sees an unexpected sight,
her husband wearing nothing but a smile.
He says, "I'm wanting something sweet tonight.
I'll fix myself a treat. Let's sit a while.
Look out the window. Oh, the moon's so bright!"

The lady has two treats: one on a plate;
the other, buff and bare, one foot away.
No brainer! Which increases her heart rate?
She minds that racing heart without delay!
Two plates of goodies meet a soggy fate.

posted as two-stanza poem (first two) in September, 2015
lengthened to four stanzas June 20, 2016

entered in Brian Strand's Contest 256 (any topic or form, 30-line max)
on December 31, 2016    Placed 9th (of 10)


May 1, 2019, entered in Richard Lamoureau's Honourable Mention Worth
Mentioning Contest       I really worked on this one. I don't often write
a sexy poem!           placed 4th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/12/2019 9:43:00 AM
I enjoyed your sexy piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:26:00 AM
i enjoyed the element of surprise, janice... tricky you.. fine congrats and huggs!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/3/2017 8:54:00 AM
Nette, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 1/3/2017 2:03:00 AM
Hi Janice, congrats on your naughty poem. You dont hold back and thats why its so well written.Imagination runs rampant. Mocha cake indeed. I would just chomp some cheese
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/3/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks, Jannie. I love this comment! Janice
Date: 1/2/2017 11:59:00 PM
Love the humour and the naughtiness. Really enjoyed this poem Janice! Congrats! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/3/2017 12:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mark! Janice
Date: 1/2/2017 11:00:00 PM
Janice, this poem is full of romantic expressions. Love it. Congratulations.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2017 11:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal! Janice
Date: 1/2/2017 8:00:00 PM
Janice, I agree with Jean...a "yummy" poem! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2017 8:16:00 PM
Sandra, thank you so much! Happy New Year! Janice
Date: 1/2/2017 5:43:00 PM
Yummy!! I want some!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thanks, Jean!! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 8:46:00 PM
A delicious poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 9:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joyce! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 7:06:00 PM
Janice, congrats on your top placement with this wonderful poem! :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Luloo! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win...it was fun reading! :D Sunita
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sunita. Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 9:29:00 AM
You are welcome, it was a hard one to judge. There were so many good ones and only ten spots to award.
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Date: 8/7/2016 8:34:00 AM
Pistachio ice cream, I'm struggling to understand it's significance...fun read, congratulations Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 4:33:00 AM
This is very funny. Congratulations on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam! Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Kai. Glad you liked it. Janice
Date: 8/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
Such a delightful poem, Janice! Congrats on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2016 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I'm over the moon! Janice
Date: 8/6/2016 9:54:00 AM
What a cute poem this is......it puts a twinkle in the eye, and temptation to have a sweet tonight !!! lol !! Congratulations, Janice !!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Carrie! Janice
Date: 8/6/2016 9:45:00 AM
Hi Janice, congrats on your top win in my contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2016 6:22:00 PM
Richard, I'm grinning from ear to ear. Thank YOU for sponsoring the contest and for my win! Janice
Date: 6/23/2016 8:34:00 AM
Such indulgence in a night...great poem, congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Seosamh! Janice
Date: 11/29/2015 10:12:00 PM
Wow what a delightful write Janice.. I also feel the same some nights.. congrats on lovely win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 12:58:00 PM
Thank you much, Upma! Janice
Date: 11/29/2015 6:15:00 PM
Loved your winning poem, Janice. Nice twist to your tryst.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:01:00 PM
Glad you liked it, David. Thank you. Janice
Date: 11/29/2015 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:02:00 PM
Thanks, Nayda. Janice
Date: 11/29/2015 3:19:00 PM
Janice, Congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so much SKAT. Janice
Date: 11/29/2015 11:37:00 AM
Your lover must just melt into your arms, Janice. Congrats on your win. Viv x
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:07:00 PM
oops! Left out THANK. Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:04:00 PM
GOOD ONE, Viv! you. Janice
Date: 11/12/2015 3:34:00 PM
Sweet dreams Janice, well done, warm regards, Laura.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/13/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Laura. Janice
Date: 11/1/2015 10:58:00 PM
Very nice take on the theme Janice. Enjoyed this.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/1/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, James, I'm glad you liked it. Janice
Date: 11/1/2015 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/1/2015 10:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Upma! Janice
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