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Premiere Contest WinnerMidnight Trysts

She flees the marriage bed so many nights
to satisfy base urges while he sleeps.
Apparently, he doesn't know she fights
voracious appetites and often keeps
a rendezvous with kitchen's sweet delights.

Tonight her giant slab of mocha cake
is covered with a mountain of ice cream,
pistachio. Tomorrow night she'll make
another huge confectionary dream.
She sacrifices sleep for sugar's sake.

But then she sees an unexpected sight,
her husband wearing nothing but a smile.
He says, "I'm wanting something sweet tonight.
I'll fix myself a treat. Let's sit a while.
Look out the window. Oh, the moon's so bright!"

The lady has two treats: one on a plate;
the other, buff and bare, one foot away.
No brainer! Which increases her heart rate?
She minds that racing heart without delay!
Two plates of goodies meet a soggy fate.

posted as two-stanza poem (first two) in September, 2015
lengthened to four stanzas June 20, 2016

entered in Brian Strand's Contest 256 (any topic or form, 30-line max)
on December 31, 2016    Placed 9th (of 10)


May 1, 2019, entered in Richard Lamoureau's Honourable Mention Worth
Mentioning Contest       I really worked on this one. I don't often write
a sexy poem!           placed 4th
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Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:43 AM
I enjoyed your sexy piece. Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:26 AM
i enjoyed the element of surprise, janice... tricky you.. fine congrats and huggs!
Canerdy Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Nette, thank you so much! Janice
Breedt Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Hi Janice, congrats on your naughty poem. You dont hold back and thats why its so well written.Imagination runs rampant. Mocha cake indeed. I would just chomp some cheese
Canerdy Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Thanks, Jannie. I love this comment! Janice
Martin Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:59 PM
Love the humour and the naughtiness. Really enjoyed this poem Janice! Congrats! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 12:49 AM
Thanks so much, Mark! Janice
Nusker Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:00 PM
Janice, this poem is full of romantic expressions. Love it. Congratulations.
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:46 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal! Janice
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Janice, I agree with Jean...a "yummy" poem! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Sandra, thank you so much! Happy New Year! Janice
Murray Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Yummy!! I want some!!!
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Jean!! Janice
Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:46 PM
A delicious poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks so much, Joyce! Janice
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Janice, congrats on your top placement with this wonderful poem! :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Thanks so much, Luloo! Janice
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Congrats on your win...it was fun reading! :D Sunita
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Thanks so much, Sunita. Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM
You are welcome, it was a hard one to judge. There were so many good ones and only ten spots to award.
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Pistachio ice cream, I'm struggling to understand it's significance...fun read, congratulations Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Neumann Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 4:33 AM
This is very funny. Congratulations on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Thanks so much, Sam! Janice
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Thanks so much Kai. Glad you liked it. Janice
Haight Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Such a delightful poem, Janice! Congrats on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I'm over the moon! Janice
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:54 AM
What a cute poem this is......it puts a twinkle in the eye, and temptation to have a sweet tonight !!! lol !! Congratulations, Janice !!
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Thanks so much, Carrie! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Hi Janice, congrats on your top win in my contest.
Canerdy Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Richard, I'm grinning from ear to ear. Thank YOU for sponsoring the contest and for my win! Janice
De Burca Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Such indulgence in a night...great poem, congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thanks so much, Seosamh! Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Wow what a delightful write Janice.. I also feel the same some nights.. congrats on lovely win!
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Thank you much, Upma! Janice
Fisher Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Loved your winning poem, Janice. Nice twist to your tryst.
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Glad you liked it, David. Thank you. Janice
Negron Flores Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Thanks, Nayda. Janice
A  Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Janice, Congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Thank you so much SKAT. Janice
Wigley Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Your lover must just melt into your arms, Janice. Congrats on your win. Viv x
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:07 PM
oops! Left out THANK. Janice
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:04 PM
GOOD ONE, Viv! you. Janice
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Sweet dreams Janice, well done, warm regards, Laura.
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Laura. Janice
Inman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:58 PM
Very nice take on the theme Janice. Enjoyed this.
Canerdy Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Thank you so much, James, I'm glad you liked it. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much, Upma! Janice
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