Midnight Son

Oh, those days of a Midnight Son
Of wild abandon
Love on the run

When sunset goals invade the brain
And hijack thoughts
A one-way train

For life begins at 12 am
At clubs and bars
No rules to stem

In rendezvous, in tryst of love
Where lusts prevail
Affairs thereof

Alas, a Midnight Son grows old
Yet, memories stand
In thoughts paroled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 1/13/2018 9:56:00 AM
As a once midnight daughter this drew me in and I recognized bits of my younger self in your stanzas. Your poem was like a visit to the past, an enjoyable one because time only kept the good parts. That may just be my watch. Well done. Blessings ... CayCay
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/13/2018 3:05:00 PM
It’s funny how time does that, sometimes I really miss those times, ahh youth!! Thanks CayCay
Date: 1/9/2018 12:36:00 PM
Such a thought-provoking write. I love it. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/9/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Jul-Michelle, I appreciate your kind comments, !!!
Date: 1/7/2018 7:56:00 AM
It is funny how the years change us when we think they never will, like enjoying long hair music. A lovely nostalgic piece Mike! : )
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Connie - did you really just call rock n roll, long hair music? Really?
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/7/2018 9:50:00 AM
I certainly agree, thanks so much, Connie xxoo
Date: 1/6/2018 8:47:00 PM
Maybe not old Mike, just wiser. "old" is subjective, Lol. I love this reminiscent poem. I remember those as a 'daughter moon' Great write, my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/7/2018 9:51:00 AM
Agreed, Thanks so much Rhoda xxoo
Date: 1/6/2018 5:40:00 PM
Good one, Mike. Funny how we don't really miss those wild days after all.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thanks so much xxoo
Date: 1/5/2018 4:22:00 PM
A reflective poem..memories of nights hunting fun..well written, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!!
Date: 1/5/2018 4:04:00 PM
Those were the days my friend I hope they'll never end...Nice one Mike
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!!
Date: 1/5/2018 3:08:00 PM
Deeply exprrssed Mike..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Silent one !1
Date: 1/5/2018 2:47:00 PM
Hello Mike,people do have memories of those days gone by. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend.xxx-ooo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/5/2018 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, Have a great weekend!!
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