Midnight Sky

Drop down into darkness Just you and I Let's take these stars and shoot them down Then we can fly. The swirling mist beneath our feet Dissipates to nothing where our eyes meet. We're not quite in shadows A spark resides Between the space of my hands and yours The fear- just dies. These blue eyes could be the sea Pulling me deeper with their gravity. I drop down into darkness Where you and I Can take the world and let it drown In the depths of this midnight sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/18/2018 2:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Juli-Michelle - all the best to you!
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Date: 3/14/2018 12:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:25:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 3/10/2018 11:35:00 AM
Lovely imagery Juli, well done...
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Date: 3/8/2018 4:44:00 PM
Deep, pleasurable, lovely read, graphic brilliant write. Also love the picture you pick, goes very well with your poem. GREAT JOB!!! :) James
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:56:00 PM
A most pleasant read. Well done, Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:47:00 PM
Very romantic poem, Juli Michelle. Oozing with passion.
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Date: 3/8/2018 1:20:00 PM
You are right... nothing like it.... Vivid imagery..
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:46:00 AM
Awesome poetry..clever use of words and precious imagery..well written, Juli.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:32:00 AM
You've painted a lovely, majestic scene, Juli-Michelle! Janice
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:28:00 AM
Very nice Juli-Michelle :) I enjoyed this.
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