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Midnight Pearl

The ocean breeze was beckoning. The salt was on my tongue. I shed my clothes and jumped inside. Just like when I was young. I swam out in the darkened sea. The moon provided light. It shone upon the rippled waves. And danced in silent night. Then something brushed against my toes. The touch was feather soft. And then I felt it once again. Within the ocean waft. I dove inside and reached around. And found my midnight pearl. That night the sea bestowed a gift. I was the lucky girl. For Russell Spivey's contest 'Midnight Pearl', by Samia Ali Arroyo, on April 15, 2012

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Date: 6/29/2012 12:11:00 PM
This is a beautiful poetic work..Enjoyed reading your contest entry...If the contest hasn't been judged yet, good luck with this sure winner...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/30/2012 6:04:00 AM
Hey Sara, And thank YOU for all your comments on my poems ...Samia :)
Date: 4/18/2012 6:14:00 AM
Very well done Samia, like it.Wish you all the best in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 6:43:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you very much! :)
Date: 4/16/2012 2:05:00 PM
Thank you for your very kind comment Rockman. I do appreciate it ...Samia :)
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:13:00 PM
Another good one. You should do well in this poem. Good luck with it. Talent like yours should not go unrecognized. Rockman :-)
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Date: 4/15/2012 9:04:00 AM
Very nice...enjoyed reading this. - Gail
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/15/2012 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Gail! :)

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