David Mohn Poet Verse

Midnight Muse

So subtle
          the undertow;
               guiding
    thoughts that descend
        below awareness-
         Wayward words
               drifting
          within dreams,
               rife with
          random verse…
            then upward,
      rhyming as they soar; 
    fresh consciousness astir.
                  Rise-
         inspiration wakes!

             05 Sep 2019
Yalto Poems Only Poetry Contest
       Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Suzanne Delaney October 1, 2019 at 4:30 PM Congratulations. I do love this. Seems a Yalto is a good way of coaxing a Muse out of hiding. SuZ

P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 11:38 AM Don't you love it when that happens! Congratulations!

Jeanne Mcgee September 30, 2019 at 6:53 PM I can feel the moment it starts to rise from your words...wonderful David. Congrats.

John Hamilton September 30, 2019 at 1:40 PM Well done David, this has been a great week, I believe I saw your name twice now in the winners circle, your talent shines bright!

Edward Ibeh September 30, 2019 at 12:59 PM This is one of the beauties that slipped by me. Congrats on a deserving win, David!:-)

Emile Pinet September 30, 2019 at 10:30 AM Congratulations David, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile. David Mohn September 30, 2019 at 10:33 AM thanks so much Emile!

Brenda Chiri September 8, 2019 at 1:37 AM Very nice! I loved this!;)

Heidi Sands September 7, 2019 at 3:43 PM Very inspirational :)