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Midnight Moon

that lone enchantress
teases with her lures
she beckons ~
like a siren out at sea



AP: 2nd place 2026, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 3, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND 4 OR 5 LINE POETRY contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Very passionate winning work. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara
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August 8, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Thank you very much, Sara ~
Alex Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Beautiful Verse. Congratulations on your win!
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August 6, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thank you so much, Christuraj ~
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May 29, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Wonderful words with a beautiful picture on this poem. love phyl
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May 30, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you very much, Phyllis ~
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May 29, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Pure enchantment as if it were a fairy tale the moon of midnight! Lovely dear, salute alkas
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May 30, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so much, Alkas ~ much appreciated.
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May 28, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Feeling the emotion... and power... well done. Ann
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May 28, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much, Ann ~
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May 27, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Your moon verse explodes in fantasy! I loved it, Well done xxoo
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May 27, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Thank you so much, Mike. Most appreciated ~
Pathak Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Yes, moon has its own unique charm, good one on the day of a total eclipse of moon
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Aniruddha ~
Roper Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Very good, good luck in the contest.
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May 27, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Thanks, Eve ~
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