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Midnight Melody For Glenn Hughes-Gettin Tighter Lyric

Written: April 19, 2024, For Robert James Liguori Contest Inspired from the Lyrics Gettin' Tighter
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As sun sets and darkness draws near, Far-off I dwell, a thousand miles away, fear. Embrace freedom; witness the band. Stay calm as you lift your hand.  Rise and claim your spot in line. Tightening with every winding whine You profess to reside in a state of pure bliss. As time oozes, it astringes most diss. Relieve burden from your mind. Indeed, it is tough to learn, I must remind. Tones establish themselves in a feasible place. A night it stretched wide, endless in its embrace.  Endless twirling, a dance of grace. Nature slips away from your serene embrace. One single thing that matters most is time. Creating something is simple and sublime.  Let melodies soothe your soul. Beneath moon, soft light is a goal.  Let it assist you escape from worldly strife. A steady path where hurdles impede life.  An embrace, deep and true, with bass line. Envelopes you, enhancing your shine. Guitar melody echoes with yearning and sorrow. Amidst twinkling stars, a cosmic canopy follows. Musical notes oscillate and sway. Amidst shadows, reverberate in the sky. In symphony of silence, your eyes close. It's just you and a beat for the night's rose.    A rhythmic pulse, soul to soul. In this fleeting moment, you're a dole. Of something genuine and complete. Behold power of this dark street.   Throngs sway, and time is right. Under gentle radiance of lowered light. Each chord, each tune, in flawless balance. We're all united beneath moon valance.   So, let any issues dissipate and fade away. In melodies, your imagination may sway. Vibes are fresh, and night is bustling. That's what makes deep purple pummeling.

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Date: 4/20/2024 6:34:00 AM
brilliantly constructed poem, dearest Sotto. Your signature imagery and alliterative lines made for a captivating, enchanting read. I especially enjoyed these lines: In symphony of silence, your eyes close. It's just you and a beat for the night's rose. A rhythmic pulse, soul to soul. In this fleeting moment, you're a dole. Best wishes in the contest, dear poet friend. Have a splendid Saturday as well, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:20:00 AM
Delightful harmony you convey, my friend--in this ode to the song and the artist. I hear the rhythmic voice through your verses. ---Let melodies soothe your soul. Beneath moon, soft light is a goal. Let it assist you escape from worldly strife-- a song will do that attuning to life.
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:06:00 AM
How beautiful is this take on the lyrics dr sotto! I need to write for this contest too and i must say youv done an excellent job that flows with brilliant metaphors and imagery, depicting such heartfelt emotions in the most eloquent manner! Love the rhymes and rhythm of this poem too especially loved the lines “ Musical notes oscillate and sway. Amidst shadows, reverberate in the sky. In symphony of silence, your eyes close. It's just you and a beat for the night's rose.” Flawless alliterations.. this should do very well in the contest! And I absolutely love it!
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