Midnight Hour

* There was one midnight hour when I stood alone
   Beyond my bed, and before the window of the room
   I was the child in the white flannel gown
   Watching a white moth fly and a white moon rise
   The whole family slept..except for me
   They never heard me steal out onto the porch
   And climb down the steps into the fresh night air
   Under the sequined sky crowned as mistress of our valley

   Something whispered to me, in a voice dimmer than words
   It spoke with the drum of the cricket's thunder
   Faintly capricious, lulling my steps upon the concrete slate
   I struggled to learn how to breathe again this hour late
   But trepediation vaporized, soft and cunning, wise
   Temptation embedded my bare footed quest
   Without hesitation, no fear of unknown
   Lit by bleached crescent moon,           
                                        I knew I was not alone.... 




Inspired by Gareth's contest "Leave me hanging"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/4/2010 5:03:00 PM
Awesome, Carrie, it leaves me really wanting to know more! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Gareth's Leave me hanging contest ..a fabulous write and special win for u to enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Gareth James's contest "Leave Me Hanging". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2010 11:29:00 AM
I hope we get a chance to read the conclusion............ GOOD LUCK! RAY
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Date: 4/20/2010 12:01:00 AM
Full of suspense Carrie.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poetry today .Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/19/2010 10:07:00 AM
very nice write good luck in the contest and thank you so much for your kind comments and for all of your suppoert faleshia
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Date: 4/19/2010 6:51:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your suspenseful poetry this morning Carrie. Wishing you the best in the contest.Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:49:00 PM
VERY VERY good, queen poetry! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:46:00 PM
Next episode eagerly awaited...Margaret
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Date: 4/18/2010 6:35:00 PM
I want to know WHO was there! I know you had to leave us hanging, but I am having trouble reading these and not knowing the outcome. Very compelling! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/18/2010 6:09:00 PM
nice one, have a good one
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Date: 4/18/2010 6:08:00 PM
Oh Carrie, cant wait for part 2..this is good! BG
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:14:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie...another for my favs..So talented..The Crickets,The Mistress Sky...the Crescent Moon..awesome...Charma
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