Midnight

Midnight

shadows in small places
empty eyes dancing
tortured looks
forcing straight lines
facing straight down
pretending so pretty
  and the cold is here

I like to watch when she listens
does she see me
the way I'm feeling down

so just be
and me, I couldn't of ever wanted you more
into the night
and all of our promises
you were the first
and always
my always
staring, if I could
the reflection in in your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 10:17 PM
I agree with Dorian, Mike -- very beautiful and romantic poem indeed! My best regards. :) john
Alexander Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 2:50 AM
Thank you so much John, It feels good to know that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you again.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Very beautiful romantic poem Christian!:)Enjoyed it!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!D
Alexander Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Thank you very much Dorian, I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. You have a nice weekend as well, and God bless you as well.
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