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One big boom reverberates, we shelter 'neath the railway bridge, the swirling wind ensures we get a soaking anyway. The Croal is roaring well above the watermark, the nature lover in me hopes the smaller fish will beat the flow and seek a sheltered cranny. Peewits squeal, and wheel through softened skies, as sunshine makes a welcome reappearance. Drying out, we wait for trains, our notebooks at the ready. A record twenty-six come through, some chug to local destinations, others muscle by, non-stop, to Carlisle and the Scottish Highlands. We eat our sandwiches in silence, underlining names and numbers. Clambering up the embankment and skittering down, as gravity grabs then releases we fall in a heap, and can't wait to do it again! An impromptu game of catch, throwing stones instead of tennis balls, our laughter uncontrollable, we trip and stagger home. The warp and weft, the fabric of my youth still reassures me with these moments of enduring truth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2014 10:02:00 AM
"The warp and weft" weaving sings and had me at my dictionary along with Croal and Peewits. Wish my huband were here to see if knew the peewits. He was an avid birder, but not a list keeper. Brings to mind Dylan Thomas. love, Kathy
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:16:00 PM
oh, how i've missed reading your poems, keith! thanks for this peek into your childhood - i felt like i was right there with you and your friends. i love this poem and the brilliant couplet at the end ties it all together so well...
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