Microexplorers Scaling An Egg

The glacial slope is tall, a vast and perilous globe 
It has been a whiteout for nearly three days now
We do all we can with our equipment to maintain our footing
The surface is so uncertain, but the summit is within reach 
5 am, Thursday (?), We are awakened by an earthquake 
An intolerably loud crack, perhaps a large chunk of opaque ice falling into the sea 
Some sort of strange eclipse now, a great silver moon appears overhead 
And now---now a wall of molten yellow magma approaches us! 
I must stop writing and seek shelter, pray for us small men!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:46 AM
LOL! LOL! Great idea and presentation of a winning work..Congrats..Sara
Martin Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Sara! Very sweet. And thanks to everyone else for all the comments! XOXO
Beck Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:22 AM
clever stuff and it is exactly the sort of bizarre scenario I like.....well done ..... best wishes
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Congrats on your win..this is very clever...BG
Williams Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 1:40 AM
Jeremy congrats on your win...David
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 3:02 PM
An exciting take on the egg theme. congratulations Jeremy. Love, Joyce
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeremy! An excellent and interesting write!! Love, Rhonda
Grisetti Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Well done unusual poem. Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:47 PM
How great is this [nice to meet YOU..if I might suggest to you a read Robert Forward's Starquake] Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jeremy. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:51 AM
...lol... good Jeremy!!!! - Wish you luck in egg contest - Hope you are well..... - oxox Anne-Lise
Martin Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:58 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise :]
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