Meth Rage

I dreamed last night all the hair was missing from the back of your head.

You were back combing but I could see.

longs strands could not hide the damage
it was too extensive
I could see shorter hairs
I could see your scalp

then I knew:
he was pulling your hair out in a rage
I could clearly see him holding you and ripping at the back of your head
a clear black vision
no mother should see

"my hair is fine" you texted back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joseph Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 7:35 AM
That's the truth, and this teenager is 32. The gift that keeps on giving.
Loving Iii Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:16 AM
from what i hear; a teenage daughter is your worst nightmare. and i believe it. john
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace