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Just for fun...Don't have any idea about meter...Sara
Meter, meter I am going to meet her See her, see her, I am going to see her Greet her, greet her, I am going to greet her Treat her, treat her, I am going to treat her Please her, please her, I am going to please her Leave her, leave her, I am going to leave her What kind of meter is this would you say? I guess the fickled kind....

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Date: 1/28/2012 5:51:00 AM
Enjoyed the humour very much sara.A witty write from you.
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Date: 1/27/2012 2:53:00 AM
Sara Thank you for sharing this form. I have wondered at one time what an iambic pentameter is. I am humbled, as I know I have a lot to learn like this kind. Thank you for commenting on my "Serenity Response". That poem was dedicated to my son, Jershon. Love Dalila
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:21:00 PM
LoL, yes i guess it is. sounds like destiny ;)
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:53:00 PM
I really enjoyed your witty verse, Sara. I think there is too much stress on meter. Your poem has a melody all its own. Shouldn't that be enough? (We all pronounce words differently and therefore it's nearly impossible to write something that will be a recognizable meter to everyone.) I wouldn't change a thing! Best wishes in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:21:00 PM
Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon made my day. Keep them coming Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 8:59:00 AM
the repetition of phrases hynotizes me, sara.. i love the fun appeal of this and know that you will still complete your end line.. such a natural rhymer you are!.. congrats on your win in my serenity contest.. soooo exquisite..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:52:00 AM
Cute....smiling..laughing !! First line...I think you meant "meet" not 'met". One day I'll have a go at these "metered" poem forms. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:15:00 AM
A funny and interesting Meter, enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:11:00 AM
A fun write by the sounds of it- bless you Sara : )
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