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Written, April 26, 2024
For The Contest, “Line Inspiration”
Sponsor, Joseph May

Metaphors penned with psychedelic ink most times present as imagery, forthright. But, if they're scanned again- readers may think a nuance has come forth in a new light. To say one thing- and mean another brings a hidden vision lying deep beneath- not by the meaning of each word that springs; but deep where mystic undertones bequeath. “All comes alive with joy from the wind's kiss, that mingles with the rolling sea's soft song. In rapturous communion, joined in bliss- the wind and sea forever bound- belong.” Metaphors penned in psychedelic ink feed well our passions to absorb- rethink. Line #4

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:15:00 AM
Very nicely done Sandra, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/4/2024 10:00:00 AM
Nice poem. Great win.
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Date: 4/27/2024 10:58:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Sandra!
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Date: 4/26/2024 9:22:00 PM
A very enjoyable read, Aysha
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