Written, April 26, 2024 For The Contest, “Line Inspiration” Sponsor, Joseph May
Metaphors penned with psychedelic ink most times present as imagery, forthright. But, if they're scanned again- readers may think a nuance has come forth in a new light. To say one thing- and mean another brings a hidden vision lying deep beneath- not by the meaning of each word that springs; but deep where mystic undertones bequeath. “All comes alive with joy from the wind's kiss, that mingles with the rolling sea's soft song. In rapturous communion, joined in bliss- the wind and sea forever bound- belong.” Metaphors penned in psychedelic ink feed well our passions to absorb- rethink. Line #4
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