Metaphored America (Spoken Word)

-Vicious lies continuously make love to the mischievous tongs, as the politicians sentences 
are sung

-Teach the children not to join gangs or a pack, when you represent the right wing red flag 
and she’s an O.G. democrat

-As Adam married Sadam Jesus had questions in went to see them, and Eve tells Jesus to 
mind his own because God gave us freedom

-Its all to confusing so I search for answers in the church

-Where im scolded because I don’t agree with a decision in the preacher mans religion

-Bullsh*it is cleverly delivered from selected alters and pulpits
Maybe that’s why so many different fundamentalist are so full of it

-And the list goes on

and i stand here. just watching

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/25/2009 9:26:00 AM
Still holding some anger? I do believe in Judgement day and I do believe those who put themselves high enough to judge others will be judged themselves. This was an honest write. Too many people think they know what's best. I usually just politely ask them "who died and left you in charge?". God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/24/2009 5:14:00 PM
Beautiful music my friend.. I love this piece so much.. ya bring it with this style.
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Date: 2/24/2009 4:57:00 PM
(just a quick short freestyle i did in the slam poetry circle last night) its very border line for the soup, with the religion/homosexual/political comments but its reality in a metaphorical sense- sorry if i offended anyone with it fantasy is what the want and reality is what they need
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