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Poem written for and submitted to "Complete Monorhyme" poetry contest, Hilo Poet, sponsor, December 3, 2025

METAMORPHOSIS

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The seed  planted in frozen earth now grows,  
     through storms and time, its tender stems arose.  
          Once choked by thorns, stubborn, toward light it goes,  
               No pleas for light—it takes what sun bestows.  

The moth unfurls from silk it once outgrows,  
     the river carves the rock, no hammer slows.  
     Wounds I wore now bloom in the vein I chose,  
          old meanings dissolve where deeper Knowing flows.  

Stars fade as night gives way to dawn’s quiet repose~
     my former self decays, unmourns, and does expose
          my ego, that internal script that age and turbulence depose.   
               soul reshaped—my life is now stunning prose.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Congrats on your work placing in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
Watts Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Hi Sara A nice summary of metamorphosis A change in many things is healthy congratulations on you win Cheers Christine
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 7:07 PM
Well penned, Sara ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:23 PM
many thanks!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 10:08 PM
Expertly done. You have a fine rhyming sense. Best for a win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:24 PM
wow, thanks, Victor. GRateful for your complimentary words and visit today
Hind Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:47 PM
An inspiration this is!! Good luck!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:24 PM
thanks, sweet Paige.
Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 8:21 PM
Excellent! G.L. in the contest, gw
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:23 PM
thanks for your visit and encouraging words.
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Ahh!! I like this monorhyme. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:25 PM
aww, thank you, Sara K. I'd not written a monorhyme before...a bit of a stretch. appreciate your visit, hugs & blessings, SAra B
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