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Metamorphosis

slow ascent uphill step by step we enjoy smelling the roses soul’s ascent uphill magnetism rises what intensity can our form hold we have no questions about the bliss burn because in time we become the flame

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Date: 2/8/2024 1:38:00 AM
This metamorphosis is so covetable. But it is a slow ascend. We should have patience. We should also sublimate all negativity into positivity. Without questioning, surrender to be guided by the inner light. Then we become the flame....! So enlightening and beautiful dear Seeker friend.
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Date: 2/8/2024 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa dear
Date: 2/7/2024 11:02:00 AM
A very good way of expressing your analogy.. I really like the way you did it.... and that last stanza is so true..
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Date: 2/7/2024 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, so happy these words resonate
Date: 2/7/2024 9:55:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 2/7/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jay

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