Metamorphosis

slow ascent uphill
step by step
we enjoy
smelling the roses

soul’s ascent uphill
magnetism rises
what intensity
can our form hold

we have no questions
about the bliss burn
because in time 
we become the flame
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George Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 1:38 AM
This metamorphosis is so covetable. But it is a slow ascend. We should have patience. We should also sublimate all negativity into positivity. Without questioning, surrender to be guided by the inner light. Then we become the flame....! So enlightening and beautiful dear Seeker friend.
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February 8, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Valsa dear
One Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 11:02 AM
A very good way of expressing your analogy.. I really like the way you did it.... and that last stanza is so true..
Seeker Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Silent One, so happy these words resonate
Narain Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Nice poem
Seeker Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Jay
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