Metallic Morn

Sleepy auburn hills,
Wake to the warm touch of gold:
Under pewter skies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Beautiful Haiku Raul >> James
Bourner Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:28 PM
superb imagery :) i see a hillous terrein in a golden sunrise. great job.------Ell
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Very descriptive. It reminds me of an etheree I once did. We could have been seeing the same picture!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Good job. The scene is very clear. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Martin Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Nice take on the photo, TM
Goombi Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Love the metallic colors used. CG
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Fits the photo perfectly, good job.........................Danielle
Byrne Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 7:59 PM
very metalica!
Babcock Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Sounds so peaceful God Bless Phyl
La France Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 6:47 AM
You have it when it comes to this form of poetry, no one does it better.. keep your pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance
Zakerski Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Beautiful Raul! Thank you so much for selecting my poem as a winner. It is an honor. Many thanks! Kelly
Chircop Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:18 PM
I love the touch Of Sunrise..indeed,as much as i like Sunset...Warm Haiku indeed..Raul...Charma
Pickett Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Sunrise... I got you... Well written my friend....:JP]
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:52 AM
another good one!
Cheeseman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:32 AM
That is a nice place to live thanks Daniel
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