Metalbird

Bird echoes, calls rain
          Thunder strikes, quenched as a fire
                    ashes mold mushrooms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dandrea Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:10 PM
What a nice waterfall of causality from bird echoes to the powerful summation of ashes mold mushrooms.
Jarrette Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 3:44 AM
Thank you very much sir for appreciating my poem...
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