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Metal Idol Worship

Captain America is looking flagpole beautiful in his wavy red, white and blue body-fitting uniform But, Manifest Destiny hero worship don’t even come close to his citizens A-love for the gun ... Trigger huggable sidearms Hot steel aficionados got a love that’s real Giving a Pompeii embrace to the smoking metal volcano spitting out lead lava that kills Their devotion is automatic, with preying eyes sight scope that is semi-conscious *****sapien hunters do dream of the big game safari in the fiery, savannah valley below Smeared faces with resin of the earth, follow the blood trail with their flared nostrils in the dirt Hunter of humans who worship the instrument of the killing Metal idol worship is their favorite sin Auto-repeat fantasy ... red paint pellets bursting An acquired iron-copper taste leaves the dry, explosive powdered mixture thirsting Insatiable hunger for the gun ... Renaissance technology that sent the world on a bullet run If Jesus said: Follow me, but first cast aside your metal weapon Gun owners wouldn’t give theirs up, gun enthusiasts wouldn’t turn theirs in They would say that Christ was a false prophet, and that the devil Beelzebub was His friend Behold the synagogue of a sin-strapped congregation: Observe how they be silently, eagle-eye sniper praying, with itchy, cocked trigger fingers metal idol worshiping

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Date: 3/11/2018 11:01:00 AM
Great imagination penning a great poem Freddie...
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:28:00 AM
I agree with your sentiments on gun control. Not much has been done over the years...and I don't expect much, unless the younger voters do their magic over time. Kudos for the theme, Freddie.
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:17:00 AM
I couldn't agree with you more Freddie. We were in Hawaii a few days ago and there where two taxi drivers who were in awe of how in Australia we don't carry guns and how things are peaceful. Guns were a big topic. Of course we were told that guns in Hawaii were highly regulated. Well written...Maria
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