Sharon Ruebel Poet Nonet

Message In a Bottle-Kiss-Sharon

Message in a bottle-Kiss-Sharon 



His love carried me throughout my life
Like this bottle on the ocean
Let it ebb and flow always
Should you find this bottle
Washing up on shore
please release it
to the sea
once more
kiss

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James Fraser April 18, 2011 at 10:46 AM I love it Sharon, I hope there are directions in this bottle, nice one....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 10:27 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Shar. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 8, 2011 at 8:52 AM Very emotional write here Shar!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan March 8, 2011 at 12:41 AM Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Constance La France March 7, 2011 at 3:25 PM Sharon this is so lovely, I adore it, congrats on your win~~

Jack Horne March 7, 2011 at 2:19 PM A very well deserved win, Shar - and thanks for your nice message : ) Jack

Carolyn Devonshire March 7, 2011 at 2:19 PM The eternal sea will carry your love forever, Sharon. A beautiful nonet. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 7, 2011 at 7:59 AM Super sweet message you have here-- of enduring love-- Super congrats on the2nd place win, Shar :)

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 3:30 AM Sharon, congratulations on your 2nd place win in Linda's contest with this gem ;) love Wilma

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:08 AM Wow very powerful message here. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2011 at 6:42 PM This is a well deserved win, Sharon! congratulations.

John Freeman March 6, 2011 at 5:27 PM So great to see you at the top in this one Sharon. Congratulations on your worthy second place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 3:47 PM breathless, sharon... a crown for you for the big win in this tiurney!) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 3:18 PM Hey Shar, Congratulations on your very fine 2nd place win in Linda's Contest. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta March 6, 2011 at 2:12 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Sharon

Michael J. Falotico March 6, 2011 at 12:55 PM Congrats my dear Shar!!!! a wondeful piece and win for you..love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 12:09 PM Congrats Shar on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your support...

Harry Horsman March 5, 2011 at 5:03 AM This is so beautiful Sharon. Harry

Michael J. Falotico March 4, 2011 at 1:38 PM A warming beautiful write. a winner and heart felt write.... I love it!!! love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta March 4, 2011 at 10:57 AM Nice message in a bottle, Sharon

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2011 at 8:20 AM whoo, my heart spins with such sensation, sharon.. just did mine as wel! drop by if you can and let's share notes!! this is a fave of mine for linda's tourney.. winning wishes..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 7:57 AM wow, I love how you did yours. Making it an endless message of love. I hope it scores BIG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2011 at 5:26 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Shar.. good luck luv.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece ..happy weekend my friend...